Quote: "There are still typos? In the ingame texts or elsewhere? But yeah, having someone skilled in this area to look it through when the final map is complete is not a bad idea."
Examples:
The first sign
'Look for signs like this. They contain usefull hints'
I think the verb 'contain' should be replaced, because signs don't really contain stuff. Boxes and chests do, for example.
'Usefull' is spelled 'useful'.
The text should read: 'Look for signs like this one. They provide useful hints'.
Elder
'The darkness has awoken a golem in the forest. We are affraid to leave our homes. I can pay you, if you help us slay it'
'Affraid' is spelled 'afraid'.
'if you help us slay it' suggests that the villagers and you slay the golem together. But you go Rambo on him, so 'if you slay it for us' would probably be the better choice.
'him' might be better than 'it', because it's more personal.
I believe you can drop the comma, too.
The text should read: 'The darkness has awoken a golem in the forest. We are afraid to leave our homes. I will pay you if you slay him for us'.
Title: Unkown Traveler
'n' missing in 'Unkown'.
If you're using American English, 'Traveler' is spelled correctly.
If you're using British English, 'Traveler' must be spelled 'Traveller'.
Undertaker
"The dead have been disturbed. Their gosts are blocking the path to the temple. Normal weapons can't hurt them'
'gosts' is spelled 'ghosts'.
'Normal' should be replaced with 'Ordinary'.
I'm far from being fluent, but we have a lot of members hailing from the US and UK, I'm sure someone will do the proofreading.
Quote: "I've had this show up once before on a different level during a playtest at a convention.. Not sure if it was a cave. It's the old level select thingy. Thanks for showing me how to reproduce it so I can fix it! "
Also happens with signs (and other stuff I guess) .
Quote: "Yeah. But I rather go through a publisher than doing it by myself. So far it's been either not what they were looking for or they are too busy. Hopefully my contact has better luck than me. Having a publisher helping out with marketing and distribution can multiply the sales many times. Also it would mean less work for me so I can focus on making games."
True. Sending your game to the right Twitcher or Youtuber can also get you a lot of publicity.
Getting your game on Greenlight is a very easy process. Getting greenlit can take some time, though. You should really consider uploading it on Steam Greenlight. It can really help spread the game.
It's just additional publicity.
PSY
