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FPSC Classic Models and Media / oleg's model pack , need some help guys...

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Strelok
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Posted: 27th May 2007 22:03 Edited at: 3rd Aug 2007 12:49
I'm working on a new model pack.
But you all know that i'm not a pro. So that's why i need your help guys.
You have to give comment on my models. Maybe the texture is to ugly ?
Size to big or maybe to small ? Say it all !
With your comments you can help me create a good model pack !
For eath helper i'm going to give a special model pack , but a bit later.
I'm hoping you guys can help me a hand ! Anyways that's for comments !









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Opposing force
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Posted: 27th May 2007 22:06
Wow, those models look exceptional!

Strelok
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Posted: 27th May 2007 22:08
thanks ! also i want to say eath model going to have normal map.
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Posted: 27th May 2007 22:09
If all your other models are up to this standard you're suddenly going to get a whole lot of devoted followers! lol

Looks great! Any details of what other models will be in the pack? Or are you letting us non-talented folk decide?


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Strelok
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Posted: 27th May 2007 22:12
thanks again ! well i was thinking making some stuff from S.T.A.L.K.E.R .
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Posted: 27th May 2007 22:52
Very nice Oleg.

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Posted: 27th May 2007 23:05
I think the bricks on the buildings look real good, but the windows look a bit too fake. other than that give give you five grandpas!



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Posted: 27th May 2007 23:19
Very nice work Oleg.

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Posted: 27th May 2007 23:35
Looks very nice oleg.
I also made a crane doesnt looked as good as your's though.
But very nice.

And the trees?
Are they photo's edited?
Anyway looks nice!
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Posted: 27th May 2007 23:59
WOW! I cannot even model... This is awsome!!!
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Posted: 28th May 2007 00:12
Here is my honest opinion.

The trees look to fake. They look photoshopped right out of a picture. I think you should blur it some and figure out how to make it less picture - ish.

The crane is actually really good.

The texture on the reactor looks a bit stretched a low-res, but good model though.

The textures on the buildings don't look so good. Did you take it from a picture or make it on the computer? Because from the picture it doesn't look so swell.

Are you going for like a Chernobyl - themed pack?

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Posted: 28th May 2007 00:29 Edited at: 28th May 2007 00:31
Glad to hear you like it !

trees : yes , they are photo edited and i know they looking ugly
but they don't belong in the pack. I need to find some natures tutorials to make some good ones.

Nuclear station : it's one model , that's why it's low quality. The point of it is that you have to place it far away from the player.
For a nice 3d background effect. But also they don't belong in the pack.

Guys , that you very muth for your great help ! Now i know where i need to look next time and keep my eye on little things.
Your help meen a lot , now i'm going to make a new model.

PS : Yes , i'm aming to create Chernobyl theme pack but i need a lot of work.

Cya soon , Oleg.
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Posted: 28th May 2007 01:38
Cool! I was considering making a Chernobyl themed pack. Then decided against it.

Check out this website for pictures of real present day Chernobyl. Also, check out S.T.A.L.K.E.R. :Shadow of Chernobyl for inspiration.

Looking at the above resources gave me lots of inspiration for my game, so I would check them out.

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Posted: 28th May 2007 01:57 Edited at: 28th May 2007 02:07
Yeah , i also got that cool game but the russia verison.
That game give me also a lot of inspiration.
Thanks for the useful site.
EDIT: i have looked at the site...man..i don't feel good.
One way i feel happy about inspiration and other way i feel sad...
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Posted: 28th May 2007 02:17
Oleg, I like the textures on the crane quite a bit but I think you should reference it a bit more. Some things like the counterballance weights don't lok right and there appears to be no way for the arm to rotate side to side. I really like the use of alpha on that one.
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Posted: 28th May 2007 02:23 Edited at: 28th May 2007 02:23
Thanks ! i know what you mean about counterballance , i have to make his tale longer(i think).
But what do you mean with reference ?
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Posted: 28th May 2007 02:33 Edited at: 28th May 2007 02:34
I don't think it really needs to be longer. It's just that the weights on the back look sort of haphazzarldy stacked. I think they're usually linked together with some kind of cabling system so that they can move about to adjust for different weight loads being hoisted by the crane. I could be wrong though but it's what I seem to remember from watching large construction sites.

By reference, I just mean photo/blueprint reference to help in model accuracy. It looks like a typical (innaccurate) video game model to me which I suppose is fine but I think you have the skills to do something really great.
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Posted: 28th May 2007 02:38
oh , yeah thank you very muth

I got the point ,i will post the update tommor when my other model is ready.
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Posted: 28th May 2007 02:55
dude i wanna help i can do textures if u want its up to u peace

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Posted: 28th May 2007 13:21 Edited at: 28th May 2007 13:22
Quote: "dude i wanna help i can do textures if u want its up to u peace"

I don't think you can't help me with the texures , but you can give commets like other guys. That help me a lot.
And if you just say few words about the texture , style , size...
Then i just want to thank you and give you a special model pack.
But a bit later , when this one is ready.
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Okey , here is my new model it's a power house. Hope you can find a lot of stupid bugs lol.
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Posted: 28th May 2007 15:48
looks great to me! Does it come with the boards or can you enter it?


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Posted: 28th May 2007 15:49
Lol, You've written your name on the side of it.

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Posted: 28th May 2007 15:54
Looking very nice.
Great texture!
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Posted: 28th May 2007 16:08
Looks cool Oleg,you might want to scale the roof texture a little smaller tho'.
best rolfy.

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Posted: 28th May 2007 18:27
I agree with rolfy, but other than that, it looks fantastic.

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Posted: 28th May 2007 19:32 Edited at: 28th May 2007 19:36
Glad to hear you like it !
Quote: "looks great to me! Does it come with the boards or can you enter it?
"

Well , i was trying to stay low poly...so you can't but that is a good idea.
Inspire and Rolfy : I see what you mean , i'm going to fix that
Well , now i'm going to create more models. In the meen time you can watch this funky gif animation lol >.<
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Posted: 28th May 2007 19:36 Edited at: 28th May 2007 19:45
Man, I didn't think it even moved, then all of a sudden I caught something out of the corner of my eye....

What was it that moved?

EDIT: Hah! Wow. Before it didn't move and now it does. Nice.

EDIT #2: I sent you an email OLEG.

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Posted: 28th May 2007 20:27 Edited at: 28th May 2007 20:28
Inspire I send you a e-mail.
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Posted: 28th May 2007 22:45 Edited at: 28th May 2007 22:56
OLEG, the textures look great. I just love them

If I look at my models, for example the gallows model, the texture's much more complex.
Ok, this fact is also linked to the many groups I used...
But your texture is much better than mine.

That's the gallows texture.
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Posted: 28th May 2007 23:12
I like the power house mabey you should put a power box and some wires attached to it.

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Posted: 28th May 2007 23:22 Edited at: 28th May 2007 23:29
Thanks !
I know what you mean , you give eath of your surface a uvmap.
I only paint them ones, for example in my model i used 8 wood planks.
Eath of the planks got the same texture.
That save a lot of work , and you don't notice it on the model.
Cause you flip it or roatate it.

I hope you get my point
btw : you got a cool site..
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Quote: "I like the power house mabey you should put a power box and some wires attached to it."
Well i think i goin to model they separate , thanks for helping !
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I don't uvmap my textures.
For my gallows texture I took aa wood and a rope image, cut off parts from them and pasted them in my texture, then added details like nails and some stain, adjusted contrast and luminosity and finally I got my texture.
And it isn't bump mapped.

btw: thanks that you like it


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Posted: 29th May 2007 00:04
ops , with uvmap i mean creating your uv cordination.
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Posted: 29th May 2007 00:24 Edited at: 29th May 2007 00:25
ah yes
that's what I do.

Milkshape is best at texture coordination.


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Posted: 29th May 2007 01:38
Those models look excellent oleg. What program do use to model?

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Posted: 30th May 2007 17:16
hi all ! i made 5 new models 4 piles and an watchtower.
You cannot see the details of the watchtower... sorry for that.
Cause i don't have time to do it , cause i need to go now.
Anyway i hope you can see somethings on screen.


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Posted: 30th May 2007 17:32
OLEG, you do AWESOME work!! is this pack going to be for sale and if so, how much will it cost? I can't wait until you release it...
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Posted: 30th May 2007 17:40
The works looking excellent Oleg. Some very nice urban pieces there. Nice use of transparencies to make the structural elements in the cranes base and jib. I think I'd allow the wires on the telephone poles to droop a little, but other then that the models are looking nice.

Great work and keep it up
Loc

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Quote: "Anyway i hope you can see somethings on screen"


Is it the power house we are supposed to see?

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Posted: 30th May 2007 19:22
Quote: "how much will it cost? "

I realy have no idea... But thanks that you like it.

@Loc ; Thank you for your nice comment , about the wires i was thinking to stay very low poly on this one.
They are less then 180 now with wires afcourse.But do you have any suggestion to make it look real? and stay low poly ..
I really appreciate your option.
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Posted: 31st May 2007 01:48
Models are absolutely nice
But what is poly count of the watchtower?


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Posted: 31st May 2007 21:28 Edited at: 31st May 2007 21:29
Why not take a page from your crane? right now you have at least triangles right? As the wires? If not squares?

I'd make up two long 2 sided planes. Mirror one plane, and attach it to the other. Now you have a 2-sided plane that can viewed from any either angle.

Paint your drooping wires on those sections. Maybe raise them up higher then in my pictures and place the isolated connector deal thats on top of the cross members in the image as well. This came out at 128 poly/tri without even trying.



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Darn you Loc, I was about to answer the question with that exact answer

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Posted: 31st May 2007 21:42
Yeah but I showed pictures.....

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Posted: 31st May 2007 22:01
well i was thinking in the first place to make it on that way...
But what about the down view ? if the player standing 90° and looks up.
He will notice that the wires are not " 3d " .
Anyways thanks for small tut and the time for me.
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Yep... Fragmotion is good!!!
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Posted: 5th Jun 2007 22:24
Hi all !

I was very busy last week...but i stil find some time to work on my model pack.
It's a truck , a old russia style from ZIL family.
I also made a sign of nuclear warning. In this pack will be a lot of signs maybe 20-30...i dunno
I hope you like them and about the truck it's still a wip of texture. I do have to ad more details to it.

Anyways thanks for commenting !

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Posted: 5th Jun 2007 23:35
Love these, a lot.....The truck and power house are lovely models, and great textures

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Posted: 6th Jun 2007 04:01
Wow...OLEG...your work is fantastic.

*Off topic* Did you recieve my email or did you just not respond yet?

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The truck looks great except could you make the windows transparent and/or maybe even make one door open.
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