Quote: "-and why should you not submit to fate? What makes you so special?
That explains it, you see this as fate? You truly are nieave aren't you?
Me nieave, am not the man leading farmers into battle
Now who said they were farmers?"
//Empirium records for the conversation between 12th regiment captin and Rebel Weaver, 232 injured, 51 casulties, 717 disbanded from all military action.
Opposing force consisted of 100 farmers.
I got bored today so i thought id write some background lore on Blood Right,
Though i have some indecisions for the title, As Right or Rite,
'Blood Right' Right to take Blood or A kill order in the book, a given right cannot be withdrawn and must be followed or the holder will die.
Or
'Blood Rite' A rite of passage in which blood is taken. Can also symbolise the pass through adulthood, and war.
I really do like the first, as it fits into the storyline better. I have wrote quite alot for this so far, but left the story very open as from the start i let the reader learn very little about him, for that matter they dont even know his sex ,age untill three chapters in after the battle. Yes i used a cheap opening and threw the reader in head first with the MC by waking hmi up in a battle, being attacked.
Its fast paced as youd expect with a new writer, but never the less it works.
Its been bugging me that i lost alot of it in a recent screwup and that time slips away before i settle down to write. The only problem with being off and out of work for a while, time just passes before your eyes and nothing happens...
Ahh, ive felt quite calm, clear mnided for two days now, what
nice revalation awaits me i wonder. Good never just happens, fate feels pity and grants a calm before the storm...
I am in a good mood, that might be my new sig...
-Laz
