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Oolite
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Posted: 30th Sep 2007 23:58 Edited at: 30th Sep 2007 23:58
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I had a bash, far from finished and i just wanted to show it off.

Just working on it as a stress reliever at the moment.

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Posted: 1st Oct 2007 00:05
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very nice.

Only a couple of things needed a tweek I think. she has scared knee's? and very small hands and wrists.

The only other thing that looks a little off, depending if you want a perfect body or not, she seems to have a little bit of extra weight hanging off the top of her hips to the front of her stomach, almost like a spare tyre if you see what I mean,most evident on the left most picture.

but even with that very nice thumbs up to you, even with the auton look

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Seppuku Arts
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Posted: 1st Oct 2007 01:31
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Need to sort out some the human anatomy there mate, looks good though,as usual I wish I knew how to draw well on computers because I'd so do a draw over to show you what I mean.

Anyway, I look forward to seeing more.

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legs like a linebacker, if you know what i'm sayin'
great work tho

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Posted: 1st Oct 2007 10:32
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Quote: "legs like a linebacker"

other than the scratched knees the legs look a lot like my gf's and she aint no linebacker

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Posted: 1st Oct 2007 18:08
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The other guys said all that I could say. Looks nice so far.


Good usage of the stress, by the way. I use to play flash games or swim when I am stressed, and I can not do anything else.

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Oolite
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Posted: 2nd Oct 2007 01:10 Edited at: 2nd Oct 2007 01:13
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Quote: "Good usage of the stress, by the way"

Yeah, i figured why waste time on long walks, or petrol on long drives to relieve stress, lets put it to something productive; More portfolio work.

I agree with the wrists and the legs, i have shortened the legs since because they were bugging the hell out of me and the wrists ended up shrinking during the ZB smoothing faze.
I'll post some more screenies after damien rice tomorrow night.

EDIT: what do you think of the pose? Its not too pornographic is it? I tried to go for a more subtle artistic approach.

Cheers Guys.

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Posted: 2nd Oct 2007 10:17
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very artistic, not pornographic at all. If anyone thinks this is pornographic they either A. don't know what artistic is or B.Don't know what pornographic is..

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Posted: 2nd Oct 2007 16:10
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pornographic? maybe if she was bent over a couch or something but your pose reminds me more of Roman/Greek sculptures
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Posted: 2nd Oct 2007 18:18 Edited at: 2nd Oct 2007 18:19
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Alright then, cool. I just thought from some angles it looks like she's grabbing her breasts and moaning, heres my inspiration.



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Posted: 2nd Oct 2007 23:01
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actually yours looks less pornographic. the sculpture seems to be doing an in your face pose.

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Well done, might want to add some clothes, if only to eliminate pose confusion but still looks good.


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Posted: 5th Oct 2007 23:38
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Its study of the female form really, so no clothes.

Also, sorry for the lack of updates, works been getting in the way of me spending any time on this.

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Posted: 6th Oct 2007 02:01
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Quote: "Its study of the female form really, so no clothes."

Understood,still great work.


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Well, if this is pornographic I'm sueing my school for taking me to the classic museum here in the Netherlands before I was 18.

Looking good, the knee's look... odd... to me. Besides that, very awesome .

Hope you get your work sorted out so you'd have some time to get back with us on TGC Heroes. .


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Quote: " before I was 18"

Lol! You're a man ain't you? then quit you yipa yapa!lol

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Posted: 6th Oct 2007 12:29
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Lol I completly agree with deathead xD

I model I clean and I cook for you... AND I STILL DONT GET A COOKIE!!?!!?!?!!?!??
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Posted: 8th Oct 2007 05:22
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HaHa nice work oolite.

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Quote: "Its study of the female form really, so no clothes."


Rarely ever see people doing studies on the male form Not that I really want to see it...

Model looks good though aside from the above mentioned issues.

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Mr Dink, that's what I am doing with my current work in progress, though there is a limit to what I model of course, so I only did his buttocks and not his well [insert a non-rude euphemism that's child friendly]

Not everybody does female models all the time, some people I see do more male models, not because of their sexuality, but because they can define more detail on a muscular man, like the work of Hwasup Song, I only found one female model on his site.

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Posted: 9th Oct 2007 14:04
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Nice model


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Posted: 9th Oct 2007 19:16 Edited at: 9th Oct 2007 19:17
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Quote: "Rarely ever see people doing studies on the male form"

Females are easier on the eye.

Another Update.

I got rid of my ZBrush pass and edited more details in max, its been a while since i looked at this and its looking damn messy, didn't change the knees, just made the legs shorter, theres something damn wrong with her throat and her face (not sure how that happened)

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Posted: 9th Oct 2007 19:19
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Her head looks like an egg Oh well I wuld say fix the knees and add some hair

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Posted: 9th Oct 2007 19:20
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Quote: "add some hair "

Yes, its as simple as that.

That'll be the last thing i think of

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Well still I like hair, sorry if I said something bad but still, some hair would make the model more female that was all I meant. But sure do the hair last I don't mind I just wanted to know that you actually were gonna make hair at all.

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Posted: 9th Oct 2007 19:32
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Don't sweat it.

I'll put some work onto this tonight if i get some time. The neck especially.

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Okay Good job by the way

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Knee's are looking ok now,

In the black n white you can now see a problem with the navel being a bit stretched, and the hands still need sizing up a little.

Getting better though.

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Looks great Oolite. (Although I'm finding it a bit hard to take some of the other posters comments. Can you do this?! Didn't think so!)

OOlite you should also post this in the critique section of CGTalk, you'll get a better variety of comments - some from people working in film and games industries. (Unless of course you have posted there or know about it - then ill shut up!)

Okay, my comments on the model:-
- the navel looks too stetched - otherwise, I love the detail on the torso. Perhaps smooth some of the bumps just below the navel.
- rebuild the neck from scratch - don't waste time trying to move those wonky polygons around!
- did you use a cloth simulation to make the cloth? It looks a bit odd. I think its the folds, they seem too regularly spaced. The long bit hanging down looks right but its where it goes round her back. It looks like its been attached to her back just next to her right arm. Try to get the folds and weighting to appear more natural.

Great work in any case. Look forward to seeing more.

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Posted: 9th Oct 2007 21:33
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Cheers mate.
I've pondered CGtalk many times, i have an account and go on there to drool over the work sometimes but never posted anything and i'm not sure why.
Whats happened with the neck is when i was rotating the head around i missed out some edges and its caused it to look really funky, same with the back of the neck. The knees have been completely messed up when posing because i added the edge loops around the knees and was quite rough in my posing, hoping that i'd be able to get away with it when i go into ZBrush.
The cloth was done in ZBrush, rather quickly i may add. I just wanted to get the feel of the model and how its going to look, for now i'm going to leave the cloth be.
I agree with the stomach section, i have this damn habit of making them too bumpy sometimes, the same with the back.

Ta again.

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Posted: 10th Oct 2007 14:42
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*Shamless double post*

Some more changes, the arms are causing me a problem now :/

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I think her hands are too small. Otherwise it looks great.


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Posted: 15th Oct 2007 23:04
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I think hands look only ever so slightly small, her big hips doesn't help it much either.

Cheers

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the hips width is fine, its the thighs that are bit thick, not to mention the disproportionately small breasts, but thats just me

great work tho, keep it going

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Posted: 16th Oct 2007 19:50
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I'm getting wrapped up in learning to code for DS so this has taken a side burner, the freelance work has let off a bit, i'll get round to this soon though. Her breasts could do with some enlarging, i agree

Cheers mate.

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