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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Forbidden Memories (PGPS winter contest entry)

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Nowdie
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Story: You play as a John Smith, who has no memory of his past or who he is.One day he gets attacked by some unknown militia soldiers, he kills off all the soldiers except one. The soldier talls him that he was once part of an underground militia unit known as N.C.S.He was seen as a treat to the organization so they wiped his memory clean.He told John of an old operating base called Section IV.John kills the soldier and heads to Secion IV for answers to who he is...

Missions:2 to 3 levels


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kcelf760
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john smith like the guy from pocohantus
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Sounds like the bourne films good luck on this. Just in case no-one knows the bourne films are Bourne Supremecy and that stuff.

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Doesn't look too bad.

Quote: "He was seen as a treat to the organization"


lol! I think you mean threat.

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DarkFact
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Wow, I'm liking the screens. Nice and gritty

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The screens look great! Not sure if the story lives up to the level quality though...no offense, but you might want to look for a more unique name than John Smith. Browse some baby name sites, you'll usually find something good.


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It amazes me how the good guys always have good names; Jason Bourne, John McClane, James Bond. You'll never get a hero called 'Bob Crusty' or 'Tarquin Pitstain' would you.



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Nowdie
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lol yeah i was kinda dry on a story line.Im thinking about just abandoning this project and start on a new one.I just wanted to see what kind of feed back I would get.
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Inspire
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Looks nice. Where did you get that wall texture? I feel like I've seen it before.

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Looks good! I like the ceiling texture in the first pic.

@ Nickydude, Tarquin Pitstain! Awesome! Can I use that?

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Posted: 8th Oct 2007 11:23
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Pls don't scrap this project I wanna c where u r gowin wit this!!!

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Quote: "@ Nickydude, Tarquin Pitstain! Awesome! Can I use that?"


Of course, just don't credit me ok

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@Nickydude:

Those are all good names because they all start with "J", hahaha. But then again, so does mine, so maybe I'm just being biased.


I like the screens, nice segments going on.

Wish you would load up some action in there though...


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WOW I'v noted that 64% of the Fourm use's the name John for their main dude's name. Weard

P.S I use the name too but I got it from Halo, you know Master Cheif. His name is John so I used it.

P.P.S I read the book's and got it from there not from Halo3.

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Posted: 9th Oct 2007 05:39
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Nowdie,

Greetings. Hmmmn. Very intereting indeed. The screenshots look good. I like them a great deal.

I look forward to the evolution and completion of this title.

Personally, if John Smith is the only name the protagonist knows, I think it works. They toe-tag John Doe corpses all the time.

I would work on a heck of a good story, and reveal our hero's true name at that time.

Keep up the good work!

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Nowdie
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Posted: 23rd Oct 2007 23:34
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I've redone the levels and here are some new screenshots..crit or comments are welcome

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Juelz The Great
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that looks really good man i really like the texture's
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Orrion Carn
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Man, if your textures are like that... I need to start making my own... Gurrrr... See yah guys, I gotta get to work on some ::New:: Textures before I show my, well, showcase.


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Inspire
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I found out where I've seen that texture before!

In this screenshot, which was posted in early spring last year by you.

[I apologize for the large image resolution size, not my image]



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Great looking title. The ONE thing i suggest is that you remove the orangish rust lines on the texture, that will add a huge deal of depth to the game because it wont seem like its tiled.

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Posted: 24th Oct 2007 02:32 Edited at: 24th Oct 2007 05:57
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Nevermind...


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Help?


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Orrion,
It's quite rude to post a question like that in someone elses thread.

Dude, the level,looks great, although my only criticism is that you may have too much of a good thing going on. That wall texture is great, but it's the ONLY wall texture. maybe you could create some variations of it? Or change the graffiti on it or something. I know it feels coherent at the moment, because the walls have a common look. But you can get the same coherency with different similar wall textures.

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The point of my post was to show that the texture was created before the contest start date.

I didn't edit because my post was already buried by other posts. =P

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Sorry inspire... I just wanted to know how to fix it... Fine... I'll use the ::old:: sci-fi walls... Sorry for ::posting:: in your thread. Sorry.


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Quoth the mod:
Quote: "Asking an off topic question that is constructive is allowed, unless the thread's author wishes it removed."


As long as Nowdie considers Orrion's question to be constructive, I do believe it is allowed. Some may consider it rude, but that's entirely up to the thread author.

Nowdie:

I like the genuine placing of entities that you have going on, it really does make it look more realistic. The segments seemed perfectly fine until butters mentioned the tiling, and then after closer inspection... I realised that every segment is tiled and it doesn't matter as long as it fits the mood of the setting.

Keep up the nice work.


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Quote: "Sorry inspire... I just wanted to know how to fix it... Fine... I'll use the ::old:: sci-fi walls... Sorry for ::posting:: in your thread. Sorry."


Why are you apologizing to me? It's not my thread, I was pointing out something to Nowdie.

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@Inspire: He takes things seriously.

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these are showing some new textures
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Orrion Carn
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Nevermind... I got it working... Sorr for going off-topic in your thread Nowdie. BTW, nice textures.


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i know i haven't posted anything in a while but im going to have some new screen shots soon
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