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Troy Chambers
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Posted: 20th Oct 2007 23:46 Edited at: 1st Dec 2007 06:36
EDIT: Scroll down the page, the real story is farther down the page.

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Posted: 21st Oct 2007 00:38
I like the first one. I would do that one first, then the second one, well, second. Nice ideas.


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Posted: 21st Oct 2007 00:41
Thanks for the feedback OC.

I'm guessing from your sig/image, 2142 BATTLEFIELD is a game your working on, have you showcased it yet, it looks cool.

"You say goodbye, I say HALO."
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No, I just like the look of it... I'm working a a BF-2142 campaign for Star Wars Galactic Battlegrounds.

I used to play it... I never got around to changing it... I'm gonna do that today.


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Posted: 21st Oct 2007 00:45
First One:

Quote: "The year is 2371, 429 years ago WW4 ended in a nuclear blowout"


So WW4 took place in 1942?

Quote: "All of the humans ceased argument and befriended eachother."


Nobody is ever going to believe that one. LOL



Second One: I think it's more workable than the first. I would go with that.

Best.

I'm sorry, my answers are limited. You must ask the right question.

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Edit: I just looked at the bottom of your post... Can I use the second one

Kidding. I have my own ideas. when you make some progress on the game, could you e-mail me some Progress pics. I might have a position for you at my SWGB/FPSC site.


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Posted: 21st Oct 2007 02:39
xplosys, woops, guess I should change that to 129 years ago, didn't really pay attention there, thanks for catching it.
Quote: " "All of the humans ceased argument and befriended eachother."

Nobody is ever going to believe that one. LOL
"

Yeah your right, but they don't really befriend eachother, there are multiple killings going on in the PHEONIX station by civilians. Which was why there were guards/marines there before the Kain attacked, kindof left that out. I'll edit it now.

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Posted: 21st Oct 2007 02:44
The first post is edited now.

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Posted: 22nd Oct 2007 01:45
if u cud mix the 1st and 2nd just rite ud hav a realy cool story, instead make Phoenix a planet that the humans moved 2 and the kain made them mine there, either that or go wit the 2nd 1

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Posted: 29th Nov 2007 04:14 Edited at: 29th Nov 2007 04:24
Thanks Everyone

EDIT: Hey, I've made some changes to the story for Phoenix.

Here is pretty much, the whole outline for the game.

The year is 2317, WWIII ended catastrophically 129 years ago. The destruction, violence, and disasters made the earth an inhabitable planet. During the war, a giant space station called the Pheonix was constructed. Every living human being was evacuated Earth and began life on the Pheonix. The population is now at 2.4 billion, and of course every race of human being together, didn’t go well. The leaders of the station had to start putting guards around to stop the killings and violence. Well, things calmed down soon after, but then havoc struck again. An alien race called the Kain has attacked us several times in the past few decades, the Pheonix guards became part time soldiers against the Kain. You are Jared Lehelley, a Navajo Indian, and mechanic on the Pheonix, one day you get an assignment to fix a power outage in the security center. When you get it fixed, the workers inside the security center, they see Kain dropships approaching the Pheonix.
The guards in the maintenance sector have left to stop a fight upstairs, it’s only you, the other maintenance crewmembers, and the Kain, you find a gun and fend them off yourself. You go to the command bridge and the Commander Jenson has died, the guards cannot take on the Kain alone, so you get pulled into the job. Your next assignment:
Dr. Alec Chandlin has discovered what the Kain’s main plan is, as well as what their weaknesses are, and how to stop them. He is a resident of Sector-7, and that entire sector has been either wiped out or kidnapped.
You must rescue the doctor so you can find out how to stop the Kain, before they kill him, but, you and your wife are also residents of Sector-7, your wife ______ has been kidnapped as well, and you must also rescue her, but how.
Whatever you do, just make sure this is the last battle with the Kain.
Navajo’s were a peaceful group, well, looks like your gonna show how bad-A you guys really are, and destroy the Kain.

Weapons/Items/Health

WEAPONS

Colt pistol
Tavor machine gun
Mossberg shotgun
Chain-Gun
Pulse Pistol
Pulse Rifle
Slugger

ITEMS

Colt ammo
Tavor clips
Shotgun shells
Chain-Gun belts
Pulse Pistol cells
Pulse Rifle cells
Slugger cells

HEALTH

There are no health packs in Pheonix, only wall mounted machines that when used will restore health to it’s fullest. But be careful, they are not in every room, far from it. They are scarce, so try to stay alive as long as you can.

Enemies

Phantoms
Vanguards
Iron-Guards

There will be more, just waiting for Cheese Cake to come out with his packs and for James Hardy to finish the models he’s doing for me. Thanks to those two guys.

I'll be doing the voice overs for the first level next week with some of my friends from school, probably. I'm gonna hold off making it til I get MagicFPS to make my own segments and entities, and also til I have enough money to buy some model packs and stuff.

I'm really exited for this to get started. I want to try and make this have a feel of DOOM 3, Quake 4, and PREY mixed.

I hope to have a showcase in the SHOWCASE board in a few months.

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@ Orrion Carn
Quote: ""when you make some progress on the game, could you e-mail me some Progress pics. I might have a position for you at my SWGB/FPSC site.""


Sounds good, but what is your SWGB/FPSC site?

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Posted: 29th Nov 2007 07:38
darn, that's remotely similar to my masterpiece plotline
therefore, you have good taste, nice job

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Posted: 29th Nov 2007 21:30 Edited at: 29th Nov 2007 21:34
Quote: "kindof like a mix of Quake and Prey"
I bet I know where you got the name "Kain" from! You got it from the main characters name in Q4, Matthew Kane. The first is the best, but not to great. Try adding more imaginative elements in.
Quote: "DOOM 3, Quake 4, and PREY mixed"
Go ID Tech 4! Sounds better now, maybe make it less Q4-ish, the Kain thing and the drop-ships are from Q4 (or sound like it). I love Q4, and have beat it about 10,000 times but you don't want to look like you are copying. Other than that, sweet story man.
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Posted: 29th Nov 2007 23:11
Thanks, it means alot because I'm proud of this story. All my friends liked it but it's cool to have people who are pretty experienced with FPSC to put some good comments in, thanks.

And actually, I've never played Q4, I just know a lot about it.
So I didn't get the name "Kain" from a character in that game.

So yeah, glad to hear you guys liked it.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 03:35
Your welcome, you should get Q4, or the demo at least its the best of the three games, IMO. Can't wait to see the game in action.
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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 04:43
Thanks again. I can't wait either, with any luck I could have enough stuff to start it this weekend. We'll just have to see.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 05:07
slayer222 is right. you should get Q4. iv beat it on all 4 difficulties. its awesome.

sweet story BTW

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 05:33
Thanks hopsing45.

And thanks again to everyone who has given me feedback on my story.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 22:37
Quote: "slayer222 is right. you should get Q4. iv beat it on all 4 difficulties. its awesome."
Pfft. try beating git on Corporal with the mod I have and you'll be begging for the Vanilla General difficulty How many levels will this game have do you think?
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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 23:10
Quote: ""How many levels will this game have do you think?""


Can't say right now, probably as long as DOOM 3, which is 27 levels.
Could be longer. But I'm pretty sure it won't be less then that.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 23:15 Edited at: 1st Dec 2007 00:45
*BUMP*

If you look at my sig, above the PHOENIX image it says, "A game by Troy Chambers and DOOMED STUDIOS, well, here's the team so far.

Troy Chambers(me): Lead Developer, Level Designer, Producer, Voice Actor, Advertising, soon to be Modeller.

Mason Chamberlain: Artist, Voice Actor, Soundtrack Producer, Sound FX.

Danny Castro: Artist, Voice Actor, Soundtrack Producer, Sound FX, Website Designer. (he made the logo)

Mike Baiely: Modeller

Tyler Call: Voice Actor

Brent Blackburn: Voice Actor

A SPECIAL THANKS TO THESE GUYS. And to all of you who have commented on my story here on this thread.

Mike sent me some pics of some segs, I'll attach some of his work.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 23:16
Here's a door he made.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 23:18 Edited at: 30th Nov 2007 23:28
Oh, Here's the logo/boxart.

(made by Danny Castro)

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 23:23
Here's a better look at the floor he made.

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Here's a better look at the door.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 23:25 Edited at: 30th Nov 2007 23:26
And another door he made.



Lavaman has more coming soon. Probably wont start actual game production until I get the stuff from him. And I might be getting MagicFPS soon so I'd be able to help him a bit.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 23:31
I know thats just segs, but they're pretty cool and I just thought I'd show them. And the logo/boxart.

So yeah, it's not much, but, still.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 23:50
Not much?!???!?! Man I've been working on EOT for about a year now and I have no team, my custom media is limited to non-animated, non-UV mapped objects, nvm the box art. This really shows that your game is serious, IMO.

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Posted: 30th Nov 2007 23:57 Edited at: 1st Dec 2007 00:47
Thanks Slayer222. I just have a lot of friends at school, I told them about the game and they were dying to help me with it. And then Mike, aka Lavaman, you might know him from around here, well, I just requested some models and stuff, he got on them. And soon enough he became a team member for DOOMED STUDIOS.

So yeah, THANKS I appreciate it, I'm proud of this and I'm serious about it so it's nice to have people say that.

PS, sorry you have to go to "Download" and "Open" to see the logo/boxart, it's saved as jpg, I made sure of it, just not working for some odd reason.

EDIT: What does IMO mean?


Man, this thread has pretty much become a temporary showcase for PHOENIX, can't showcase it in the SHOWCASE BOARD until I get in-game screens.

Thanks everyone.

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IMO, that one I learned here too It means "In My Opinion".

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Oh, ok.

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Posted: 1st Dec 2007 21:01 Edited at: 1st Dec 2007 21:01
this game should be really good when its done
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Posted: 2nd Dec 2007 02:12 Edited at: 2nd Dec 2007 02:52
Thanks Lava Man.

And thanks for modeling for me.

P.S. Did you get my e-mail saying my other email adress, if not, say so here and I'll try it again.

EDIT: Oh, nevermind, just checked my mail and saw that you mailed me, it worked then.

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Please, don't use "Phoenix" for anything within your game. It's so overused.

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@Inspire- What do you mean over used, the only other things I know of with Phoenix in it is Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, and that stupid game for the DS where you play an attourney called Phoenix Wright.
And Phoenix Sentry protection.
How is it over used???

And dude, Phoenix is the name of the space station, it's the Phoenix Space Station, that's where it takes place, so, it's not gonna change.

Just Saying.

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Posted: 4th Dec 2007 05:05
Just thought I'd post screenies of some more of Mike's models.

Here is the thing that frames the doors you saw above, I guess there is one on each side and it frames it and works.

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Posted: 4th Dec 2007 05:06
cool!

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Here is a wall

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Posted: 4th Dec 2007 05:07 Edited at: 4th Dec 2007 05:07
Thanks slayer222.
Well, I guess Mike thanks you.








And here is another wall

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Man, if I had an artist like yours....

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@Slayer222-
Ha ha ha!!!

Yeah, he's pretty good.

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Hm...overused might not be the right word...generic? I don't know, it just seems a bit cheesy. Also, there is already a game called Phoenix on these forums, made by Jenkins last spring.

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Oh, well, how was I supposed to know.

I didn't join the forum till August, the last post in that thread was on the 1st of July, so I couldn't have seen it unless I looked it up first, but well. Maybe I shouldve looked before I decided the name but still. My game is a lot different than Jenkins' was.

I'm sorry the name bugs you, but I can't change it now, even if I could, I wouldn't,it's only you saying this, everyone else who has posted here likes it. And Jenkins' Phoenix was the name of a super solder group, mine is the name of a space station colonizing the entire human race after WWIII and the Kain pretty much destroyed Earth.

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@Inspre- Alright, we're both calmed down, lets stop arguing.

TO EVERYONE-

I see this game taking 2-3-4 years to make. I'm a sophmore now, and I hope to have it done by my senior year is over.

Progress will be slow, FPSC only works on the computer at my dads house and I'm only over there every other weekend and some wednesdays.

Plus, I'm just gonna do one room at a time, and make that room perfect as I can, then move on to next room and do the same thing, then keep up that process through the entire level, and the entire game.

So it will take quite a while. I might not be done until after my senior year.....YIKES

Here is the level layout:

1) Intro-Maintenance
2) Maintenance-PSS City
3) Security-Living Quarters
4) MediLabs-Military Sector
5) Detention Block
6) Alpha Sector 1
7) Alpha Sector 2
8) Alpha Sector 3
9) Central Processing
10) Delta Sector 1
11) Communications
12) Delta Sector 2
13) Delta Sector 3
14) Airlock-BioDome #1
15) Airlock-BioDome #2
16) Hydropronics
17) Site 4/Hangar
18) Phoenix: Mars Base
19) Caverns-Excavation Site
20) Phoenix: Mars Base-The End

I need to get the models from lava man(Mike), before I can start the game. Hopefully he'll be able to get them to me early January.

(Not to rush you Mike)

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hello heres what i have so far for the first thing on the list look at the walls and floors

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and the other version


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and thi combination

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cool screens dude!

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thanks i think we have it coming along well

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Screens like this and the overall progress that this has seen already makes me anxious to try and get people to help me out. But, then I realize, I have no friends that know how to model, or script, or design levels... *stares off into space longly*

Anyway... These screens do look really good.

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Posted: 25th Dec 2007 03:53 Edited at: 25th Dec 2007 03:53
They just have that *vibe* to them. They look too good.


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thanks

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