Quote: "What the!? Where'd it go, lol!?"
It appears it never was successfully uploaded. That's what i meant by my "criticism" earlier. If you re'read my first post now, you'll probably see what i meant.
For the track itself, well it was abit "thin". Tracks that rely on a single instrument need that instrument to sound as good as you can get it. What music application are you using? Try adding some reverb to deepen it. Not too much, it's easy to go overboard on that. Also see if you can vary the note strenght a bit so it doesn't sound so artificial.
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