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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Red Line *PGPS winter contest entry!*

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0NTRACK
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Posted: 15th Nov 2007 03:58
NOTE: I already made a thread for an entry, but here is my story: My computer was diagnosed with 300 viruses (that's right 300!). As a result, they had to delete EVERYTHING, I mean, everything! I decided I did not want to do all that work over again, so I have started over with a new storyline, and better maps. So, if I am still qualified to be in the contest, I thank you for your understanding.

STORY:

You are John Harrison, a criminal currently credited with 5 brutal murders. You are desperate, and have lost places to hide, so as you travel, farther and farther away from the city and your crimes, you are caught by a group of patrolling officers bent on your arrest. It seems these people have been looking far and wide for you, you're not surprised... They see you, and out of sheer panic you begin to run. You hop a fence, barely paying attention to where you are going, you fall in a pit. You then find yourself in an old military reasearch facility, Red Line. The place is abandoned, except for a skilled group of military vets, who know all about your crimes... You used to kill for money, now, you kill for survival.

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Corky
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Posted: 15th Nov 2007 04:01
One Problem, I don't see the Screenie?

0NTRACK
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Posted: 15th Nov 2007 04:02
Oh... I don't know what I can do besides provide a link, here you go (if it helps):
http://s146.photobucket.com/albums/r265/Combineclock/?action=view¤t=FPSC-Game2007-11-1420-42-10-53.jpg

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0NTRACK
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Posted: 15th Nov 2007 04:04
oops, sorry, wrong link: http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r265/Combineclock/FPSC-Game2007-11-1420-42-10-53.jpg

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Corky
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Posted: 15th Nov 2007 04:10
Yeah that works, well since there is not a lot to comment on I will try my best. I would say you need light mapping, and a hint(this goes out to everybody) If you want to make a really good game, I would make some custom media and textures, or at least just don't use stock. Its ok to use a little, but don't go crazy. Since your not that new to the forums I will take it easy on you and say your doing ok, it took me a while to get used to everybody and how good they were(butters).

If you post some more screens I will be more than happy to give you some more crit.

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Posted: 15th Nov 2007 04:20
Screenie #2:


LINK (if needed): http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r265/Combineclock/FPSC-Game2007-11-1421-15-13-62.jpg

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0NTRACK
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Posted: 15th Nov 2007 04:21
Sorry about having so much debris in the pic, but I needed the area to be completely unreachable.

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Snipesoul
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Posted: 15th Nov 2007 11:11
You can place invisible walls there right on the debris so it would seem as if it actually is blocking the player even if he jumps.

http://www.freewebs.com/snipedupstudios/index.htm

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0NTRACK
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Posted: 17th Nov 2007 00:44
Thanks Snipesoul, I'll try that, now it won't be too distracting.

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CoffeeGrunt
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Posted: 18th Nov 2007 14:49
hmmm.....looking good! From the storyline i think this will be a prety good game, shame 'bout the screenie famine, though.

You can tell i'm an old-school gamer, right?

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