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Music & Sound FX / [WIP] Forgotten (MP3)

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da power pwnerer
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Posted: 15th Dec 2007 01:10
It took me an hour or two to finish what I have done so far in this piece.

I named it 'Forgotten' because... well, I couldn't really think of a reason. That was the name that came to mind when I first played it, and finished editing it.

Tell me what you think.




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da power pwnerer
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Posted: 17th Dec 2007 15:18
Its been three days already, and no feedback whatsoever...

It sucks, I get it. At least tell me what I can improve on.




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Blood Of The Prophets
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Posted: 17th Dec 2007 16:57
Wow, it's not bad actually. Sounds a lot like some of the castlevania theme music. I can't really find much wrong with it, probably because I'm not a musician but from a game point of view it needs to be a bit longer at least around the 2 minute mark.

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Grandma
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Posted: 17th Dec 2007 18:31
Awww don't say that. It's not a good song, but it's not the worst i've heard either. What hit me first is the seemingly random notes being played, i found the pattern, but personally i like to start off with a slightly simpler motif and evolve it troughout the song instead of jumping straight to a complex one. It makes it easier to follow.

Another thing is that a single instrument playing 20 seconds of consecutive notes with exactly the same note-length and space between them doesn't always work. Third thing that could be improved is the removal of the little noise in the background. I don't know how it got there. Probably due to clipping? In which case you could fix that by simply lowering the volume of the song in the sequencer.

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Luke314pi
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Posted: 18th Dec 2007 16:57
I think the song needs a little more variety, but its not bad.

tha_rami
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Posted: 18th Dec 2007 23:16 Edited at: 18th Dec 2007 23:16
It's odd in a good way. Would fit some arcadish platformer I think.

I like it for some unexplainable reason. Won't be able to give you much critique besides making it longer.


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da power pwnerer
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Posted: 19th Dec 2007 13:09
@Blood Of The Prophets- Thank you, and yes it does need to be longer.

@Grandma- A bit harsh don't you think, but then again I was looking for criticism. Thanks for your input.

@Luke314pi- Yeah, I know. Thanks.

@tha_rami- Thank you for your comment. It is kind of odd, now that I listen



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Posted: 19th Dec 2007 16:16
Quote: "A bit harsh don't you think, but then again I was looking for criticism."


Well, it was a response to your "it sucks" comment. Sorry.

Look at it like this- Next time I ask for criticism, you can be as harsh as you want and get away with it.

(Not you, rami)

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da power pwnerer
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Posted: 19th Dec 2007 21:50
Quote: "Well, it was a response to your "it sucks" comment. Sorry.

Look at it like this- Next time I ask for criticism, you can be as harsh as you want and get away with it. "


Nah, its cool. I'll give you my most honest opinion next time, how about that




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