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3 Dimensional Chat / [WIP]My first human

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Kyle Katarn
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Posted: 18th Dec 2007 09:00
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Its the model I whipped up before my dragon. Disproportionate in most places. But for now I like it.

Massive props to Combat-Bunny for the tut on the body sculpting and RUCCUS for the tut on the hands.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=h3BXEXArdrc
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John H
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Posted: 19th Dec 2007 10:14
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Not bad for a first human, but yeah, disproportional in a few places. The first thing I notice is the pelvic area. Your character has a large lump on its front side, and a flat backside - looks like it's bum is on the front! The characters pectoral muscles look a bit too high, and a clavicle doesn't seem to exist. You would also probably benefit from making the lower ribs less noticeable, as they currently extrude from the torso rather rigidly.

But once again, very well done for a first attempt - just giving you some C&C to help make this model (and your skill as a modeler!) better Hope to see more work soon!

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RUCCUS
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Posted: 20th Dec 2007 05:03
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xD dont look at my hand tutorial! It's horrible! There are no smooth edge loops, the hand is nearly impossible to animate, and there are useless polygons all over the place. Really, its not good at all (my tutorial).

Yet somehow your hands look decent .

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Kyle Katarn
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2007 01:21 Edited at: 22nd Dec 2007 01:22
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Haha through much moving, extruding and use of the (wait for it)... smooth tool lol.

Also its not that bad to animate. I whipped this up a while back XD

http://youtube.com/watch?v=FbY0h7nPDwk
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