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3 Dimensional Chat / Sci fi World [WIP]

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Posted: 23rd Dec 2007 20:16
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I'm working on a sci game world in google sketchup and I am wondering what you guys think. Here's a few pictures















I would appreciate your comments!


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Venge
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Posted: 23rd Dec 2007 20:44
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I think you need a new texture for the control panel on the last one. It's obviously tiled and doesn't wrap right on the corners.

Other than that, looking good!

Modelled and rendered in Blender. Free software ftw.
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Alucard94
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Posted: 23rd Dec 2007 20:54
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Other than the controlpanel it is looking awesome! Good job!

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wind27382
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i think it good you sould try and add a little more textures to your models.

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Posted: 2nd Jan 2008 16:12 Edited at: 2nd Jan 2008 16:12
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Quote: "i think it good you sould try and add a little more textures to your models."


I agree everything looks a little to repetitive. But it does look good still.

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Mess it up a bit, those crates look too perfect, rotate them on the y axis randomly and offset them from each other. Id also seriously recommend adding in another wall texture, as that one with the fan seems like its being really over-used ATM. And like the others have said, change the control panel texture. Make it more interesting, maybe 2 or 3 screens, a large button panel with some leavers, a small radio box, some blank metal with scratches would even work if you didnt over-use it.

Great concept so far though.

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wind27382
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another problem that i noticed is that your textures have a web address on them which is really taking away from the believability of then scene especially since it's clipped.

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Posted: 5th Jan 2008 04:45
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thanks for the comments guys and yes the textures will need to be changed (I actually used them from here: http://www.art.eonworks.com/gallery/texture/game_texture_gallery-200051.html ) although it will be a while before I continue with this considering atm I am fully committed to TGC Heroes.

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This would greatly benefit from bump, specular, and normal mapping - you should look into it.

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so no progress I take it

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Posted: 12th Jan 2008 01:13
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well like i said, there will eventually be progress but this is really last in line with a bunch of other things Im doign for TGCH.

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