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I'm wondering how you guys think this track would work in a game?

And also looking for some general creative criticism.

This is a deviation from my usual style, as I tend to do lighter stuff normally.

I could see this as viable for sports, racing or an interactive drama like Max Payne. It might even be fun for that Guitar Hero clone Frets of Fire. I like the song, particularly the guitar work. I think a little polishing of the mastering and voicework would make it even better.

One of the things I noticed is that you are a little close to your mic. Your P's are popping a smidge and I can hear you exhaling ocassionally. At 1:50 it seems the level of your voice (and the track) jumps a few db. It sounds unnatural. Like you went from singing to me to yelling at me. I also hear what sounds like clipping on the voice track.

The voice track sounds a little dry. Maybe just a smidge of verb would be good. I like what you did with the hard verb around 1:35, I think it was well placed.

I hope you find my feedback will be useful.

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Actually, that's the first thing I tried. I could never get it to work though, my computer's a little slow on that game...


Thanks for your feedback, this is exactly what I'm looking for! Glad you liked it, and I'll take all your suggestions into consideration.