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3 Dimensional Chat / 3d female model W.I.P

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wind27382
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Posted: 1st Feb 2008 14:20 Edited at: 3rd Feb 2008 16:19
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The newest update. I'm trying to make her look prettier, at the same time Still at it. I want to fix her lips and nose. and I'm going to work on her jawbone some more.




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wind27382
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Posted: 1st Feb 2008 14:22
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sorry about the double post but the first one is reserved for updates and here are the other images















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Venge
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Posted: 1st Feb 2008 14:42
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I'd say the transition from the nose to eyebrows is a little strange, and the chin is maybe a bit too pointed. Other than that, looks good I think

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BenDstraw
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there is a seam thats just like bothering me. get rid of the seam. and make the nose wider and less pointed. and just things with proportion need to be fixed.

right now she looks likes a grumpy 4th grade teacher with a facelift

keep it up,


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SpyDaniel
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Posted: 1st Feb 2008 17:39
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The model is good and all, but it just doesn't look female.

To be honest, it looks like a muscly old man with tats.

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wind27382
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Posted: 1st Feb 2008 17:56
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Well I have been working on it a little. trying to make it alittle more pretty. I agree that it doesn't really look female. I think that I worried more about edge loops and not enough on the overall look of her.

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BenDstraw
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your sss isn't very believable at the moment and wouldn't you use cell shading for a magna style?

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wind27382
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Posted: 1st Feb 2008 23:13
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i know that sss is just temporary. so that I can see how it would look. and unfortunately she looks kind of ugly. I would even look twice at her if I seen her in real life. I'd probably run the other way. I found some better reference for her face and I'm taking time to fix her proportions.

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Roxas
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Posted: 3rd Feb 2008 00:35
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EYEZ!! Are too huge


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wind27382
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Posted: 3rd Feb 2008 04:16
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still working at it trying to make her pretty. yet believable.

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wind27382
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well as you can see she look somewhat prettier but their is still alot of work to do.

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bob_marley
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Posted: 4th Feb 2008 18:29
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shoulders are a bit manly...
every thing else i can see's been pointed out

http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=121141&b=6

simple editable text boxes..
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