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3 Dimensional Chat / 2nd model ever made, need criticism please

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dan958
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Posted: 13th Apr 2008 22:04 Edited at: 13th Apr 2008 22:06
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Hi, this is my 2nd model i have ever made in any program.

This is an armored truck of some sort and i would like criticism on how to make it better. Dont ask me to texture it becuase i have no idea how!, lolz

This is from a wire frame view:



This is normal view:



And side view:



And as i said, this is my second model i have ever made, so be kind! XD

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Beast E Gargoyle
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Posted: 13th Apr 2008 23:05
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Right now it looks like a truck with tank rail tires. I would remove the rail's on the tires and make it into a big truck or military vehicele(just an idea). Looks good to make into a few promising concepts. All the best,

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Not_Maindric
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I see a bit of Faces that can be removed, other than that, it looks pretty good.

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QuothTheRaven
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Posted: 14th Apr 2008 08:55
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Quote: "I see a bit of Faces that can be removed, other than that, it looks pretty good."

I see thousands of faces that should be removed.

Try sketching out your ideas before you model them. This is interesting for a second model but it's a bit outlandish both in terms of polygonal layout and functionality (doesn't really look like any of the wheels have any way to turn, for example. Keep it up though!

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Agent Dink
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Why does an armored truck have a spoiler? Is this the sport model?

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RUCCUS
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You really need to look at some tutorials. You've got the drive, you just need the direction. There are countless things wrong with this model; way too high poly obviously, hundreds or maybe thousands of un-needed polygons, inverted polygons, substantially uneven polygon distribution (the biggest thing you have, has less polygons that one of the wheels... :/), not to mention design wise the model doesn't make any sense at all, what are the wheels connected to, whats the cylinder track going around the wheels, etc.

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Aertic
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Posted: 17th Apr 2008 16:19
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I agree with you RUCCUS.
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