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Jesper
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 20:22 Edited at: 20th Apr 2008 20:22
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Hello! Jesper Games is me and my computer. Jespergames homepage:http://www.freewebs.com/jespergames/index.htm

Jesper Games: CrazyGame 2008!
Coming soon!!
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Ocho Geek
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Location: Manchester, UK
Posted: 20th Apr 2008 20:35
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great... really wanted to see that

your sites amazing features contains:

an incomplete template (small title missing and image above navbar)
a tonne of pictures that mean almost nothing
Two pages which both have one topic so should be one page merged
absolutley nothing of intrest to ANYBODY in the TGC forums

take some time to work on your site before you tell us about it,
Ocho

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puppyofkosh
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 20:38
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The mouse is annoying...and there are some spelling mistakes...

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Jesper
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 20:43
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what mistakes? Tell me!

Jesper Games: CrazyGame 2008!
Coming soon!!
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Aertic
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 20:47
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The music is terrible, the hoster is well known, and terrible(freewebs )
Mouse terrible, and spelling mistakes, and maybe if you had a custom theme behind it.(Not a looping picture.)
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Cyborg ART
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Location: Sweden - Sthlm
Posted: 20th Apr 2008 23:02
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Quote: "In second mission, you mast escape from german prison"

Quote: "They have large ammo suplly point"

Quote: "I was creating some games, and i was building game, Moonbase Assault."
Just don´t get it.
Quote: "And now I'm crating game"


These are those I could find that you should take a look at.
If you put a little more work on it it could actually be a good site.

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Punk13
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Posted: 21st Apr 2008 05:24
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And Why is their NO RIGHT CLICKING allowed?

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Slayer222
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Posted: 21st Apr 2008 07:18
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So you can't copy pictures and stuff.
The music was good IMO.
Give him a break guys.

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Punk13
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Posted: 21st Apr 2008 08:25
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I was just pointing something out i wasnt being harsh his site just needs a little work and if i can give you a tip jesper. If you want a professionals site you need a regular domain so instead of

http://www.freewebs.com/jespergames/index.htm

You Should get a domain like this

Jespergames.com

Bro i already went online and jespergames.com is available to purchase
Here is the link http://www.hostica.com/index.php?option=com_whois&Itemid=118

Also you need good Hosting i Recommend Hostica.com you can get hosting for as little as $1 per month heres what you get

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I Hope This Helps Good Luck Jesper

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pdidy
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Posted: 21st Apr 2008 16:00
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i think it was quite good for his first web site.
yea couple of things to fix but hey a good start.
keep working on it.
(why call the kettle black arse)
thats just an old moral to learn.
in other words dont knock it to you try it.

@ Ocho Geek
@ puppy of kosh
@ LT Tatters
@ Punk13


pehaps you could post links to your websites so we can see them.
and allow us to do some constructive crit for you.
i am sure some construtive crit would be nice to help someone
but being rude and ignorant just puts you in a league of your own,
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Jesper
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Posted: 21st Apr 2008 16:07
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I'm making it better... and sorry for my bad english, i'm finish.

Jesper Games: CrazyGame 2008!
Coming soon!!
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puppyofkosh
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Posted: 21st Apr 2008 17:13
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Alright, sorry for being rude, jesper.

Look at some sites where they are advertising for games.
http://www.ea.com/official/battlefield/battlefield2/us/
like that.

First, add more pages, have a "screen shot page", a "download page" and others.

Next, put all the info about Jesper games on the top of the home page where people can see it. Also, only put one or two screenshots on the homepage if any.

After that, get a logo to put on the top of your site, but that's easy because I made one for you.

There you go, some constructive crit. I did a logo for you in five minutes, its attached.

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Jesper
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Posted: 22nd Apr 2008 17:06
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Thanx for logo! It's great!!

Jesper Games: CrazyGame 2008!
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