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darimc
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Posted: 23rd May 2008 21:42 Edited at: 23rd May 2008 21:43
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He is my first human model. Please tell me what you think, but don't be too harsh. And I know that the head needs more detail, but I am working on it. I will post model and texture updates soon.



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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 23rd May 2008 21:50
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very good, your getting alot better at humans

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darimc
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Posted: 23rd May 2008 23:47
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Thanks.
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Aertic
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Posted: 24th May 2008 00:16
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CBModel pro?
Its very nice for a first.

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Posted: 24th May 2008 01:44
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Quote: "He is my first human model. Please tell me what you think, but don't be too harsh."

From the words of a moderator...
"To post your model on a 3D Forum and not expect critique is sheer foolishness."lol
Yeah Darimc it needs better detail I know.. I know that its your first human model blah blah. But it needs major tweaking the head is a sphere and I know you said you will model the head better, but the model is rushed, the body looks like a high-poly cube scuplted out into a chest. Oh I never used CBModel Pro, so I don't know how difficult it is compared to blender so. Yeah don't take anything offense its just what I see when I saw the model.


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Beast E Gargoyle
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The heads needs to be thiner, and not so round. ALl the best,
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Posted: 24th May 2008 18:41
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use refarance images. and research edge loops.

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TEH_CODERER
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Posted: 25th May 2008 14:22
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Quote: "He is my first human model."

Quote: "very good, your getting alot better at humans"

Hmm, sounds like its not your first then otherwise how could it be an improvement...

Anyway, as has been mentioned already, it does need more detail and the shapes, proportions and joints aren't right so try reference images. It also looks like its quite a high poly-count but I may be wrong.

Not trying to dishearten you, keep at it and you will get better!

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darimc
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Thanks for the help guys. And the head is just a sphere right now because I didn't add detail but I will work on it.

I never said no critique, I said don't be harsh.
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"To post your model on a 3D Forum and not expect critique is sheer foolishness.""


It's not.
Quote: "but the model is rushed"




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Posted: 25th May 2008 19:13
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It needs massive amounts of work. The feet and hands are stretched out cones, the torso is too wide, the arms and legs are too cylindrical, theres no muscle definition in them, the crotch isn't defined, the proportions aren't correct to the human anatomy, and you should never start with a sphere to model a human head, a box divided 3 times vertically, and 2 on the other axis' is a good starting point. Theres also the issue of there not seeming to be continuous, flowing edge loops, although a wireframe would help to see this problem.

Post a wireframe and we might be able to do a drawover of how your mesh could be tweaked to look better.

Good attempt at a first human, but Id consider starting over with what you've learnt, and looking into tutorials.

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Its CBModel it makes crappy models. And over-uses Triangles.


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Aertic
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Posted: 25th May 2008 22:25
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Unless you turn it onto High poly count, then it looks beutifull.

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darimc
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@RUCCUS, Thanks. And I will see if CB Pro can take wireframe shots.

@Deathead, only if you are inexperienced with it like me.

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Quote: "@Deathead, only if you are inexperienced with it like me"

I'm keeping with a better modelling package blender.


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darimc
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I strongly dislike blender's interface and design.
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Posted: 26th May 2008 16:09
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Mee too, but if you get pass the UI then you have a free version of 3ds max.

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I honestly find Blender GUI the easiest one I have ever used Might just be me though...

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I love the Blender interface. It's complicated, but oh so easy.

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