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Tri Alliance
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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 05:17
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Hi, I haven't been here in a long time. I just wanted to share my recent work. Can someone please give comments and/or constructive critizism on my rendered images of an ogre head?

It's supposed to be low poly, so please don't tell me it looks bad just because it's too low poly. I really tried hard at this model, and it took me a whole 2 days to make just the head in Maya Unlimited 8.0, and render it in different ways using Truespace 7.5. Also, please don't tell me it looks like a monkey head, because someone I know says that all the human heads I make in 3d (this head was supposed to be a human head, but I made it textured different because it didn't look human enough) look like monkey heads.

Thanks in advance!

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Beast E Gargoyle
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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 05:53
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Please post just a .jpg instead of a .zip. Thanks.

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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 06:00
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I think the images are too big in file size. If I make them smaller, they will lose precious detail. Sorry.

[img]OgreImage1.bmp[/img]

[img]OgreImage2.bmp[/img]

[img]OgreImage3.bmp[/img]

[img]OgreImage4.bmp[/img]
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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 06:04
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Sorry, I forgot to make them .jpg files.

I will try again.

[img]OgreImage1.jpg[/img]
[img]OgreImage2.jpg[/img]
[img]OgreImage3.jpg[/img]
[img]OgreImage4.jpg[/img]
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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 06:08 Edited at: 17th Jun 2008 06:11
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Beast, how do you post .jpg image files? I tried using the "image" button when posting the images, but it didn't work, even though I put the names of the images inbetween the two bracketed image code tags.

Sorry, I forgot about that "Edit Post" button. And sorry for tripple posting.
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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 06:25 Edited at: 17th Jun 2008 06:26
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No worries my friend. Just click attach below the message box and attach (1 .jpg picture per message) the pictures in 3 separate mesages.

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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 06:32 Edited at: 17th Jun 2008 06:33
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Ok, thanks. here's the first image:

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Here's the second one:

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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 06:35
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Here's the third:

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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 06:36 Edited at: 17th Jun 2008 06:37
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And Finally, the fourth:

Now, pick one please, and tell me which image number is your favorite.

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It's a start, you might want to add some more geometry to the model, there IS such a thing as too low poly :p.

Your shots make it hard to see what exactly the shape of the face is because the textures seem to have no lighting, but from what I can tell you definitely need to round it out a bit. Add some curves

Keep at it ^^

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Posted: 17th Jun 2008 15:19
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I do have a much more high poly version I could render in Maya, so check out that too. Thanks for a kind reveiw!

This image I made in Maya has the original UV map I made.

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The texture needs a lot of work, right now it looks like you've just taken random seemless textures and thrown them on the model. Is he even uv-mapped?

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I agree with Ruccus on this one, although can we see a solid wireframe render please? Would be much easier to feedback if we could.

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Yes, it is UV mapped, and I have the screenshot of the wireframe model of the ogre here. I copied the model in Truespace, and rotated it to get the different views of the head. This is the high poly version:

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