Sorry your browser is not supported!

You are using an outdated browser that does not support modern web technologies, in order to use this site please update to a new browser.

Browsers supported include Chrome, FireFox, Safari, Opera, Internet Explorer 10+ or Microsoft Edge.

Music & Sound FX / Dragon's Tear [New Song]

Author
Message
da power pwnerer
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Jul 2006
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Posted: 29th Jun 2008 17:50 Edited at: 30th Jun 2008 04:43
Link
I took Rudolpho's advice on making a better song, and this was the product This piece is called 'Dragon's Tear'. It can be used as either a dungeon theme or a battle theme (I was thinking more dungeon than battle ) It took somewhere around 7-9 hours to finish. My goal for this song was to, I guess, make a better song lol A good enough song to almost match up with a song from the Chrono Cross OST. I doubt it can though lol.

I wasn't sure about the drum beat in this song, so I need your opinions if they should stay in the song or not. There is also a very subtle bassline in there.

It isn't very long, but I think I am getting better, so Give it a listen and comment

The next song is gonna be an overworld theme for an RPG

UPDATE: New download



-Dan


http://Freewebs.com/noobisoft
Come to Noobisoft's website today!

Attachments

Login to view attachments
Back to top
Profile PM Email
Rudolpho
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Dec 2005
Location: Sweden
Posted: 29th Jun 2008 18:54
Link
Well, unfortunately I will have to say that I don't find it very melodical
Maybe the drum beat should sound better if you replaced the... is it a cymbal or a tambourin? (I'm meaning the one that isn't the ride cymbal).

Also, it seems that the reverb is a tad overdriven, and the bass a bit too loud.

It isn't very repetative, however, but I strongly suggest you to lower the reverb a bit and write a melody for it - then it could probably sound pretty good

"I kören hörs de brummande busarna Björnligan och Gondolen"
Back to top
Profile PM Email Website
da power pwnerer
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Jul 2006
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Posted: 29th Jun 2008 19:00
Link
Well, I couldn't properly edit it, for both my speakers are blown and I am listening with the most quiet headphones that you can possibly imagine I'll edit it later today, when I get to my good pc. Thanks for the comment, though



-Dan


http://Freewebs.com/noobisoft
Come to Noobisoft's website today!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
Indie PC Games
16
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 1st Apr 2008
Location:
Posted: 29th Jun 2008 19:06
Link
Quote: "Also, it seems that the reverb is a tad overdriven, and the bass a bit too loud."


Yes, pull off some of the reverb and tune the bass down a bit. That would be a good place to start. Than when you add a nice melody for it as Rudolpho suggests it will be a nice song for sure. The theme for the song is there just need to tweak some things up and it will be just fine.

Indie


Back to top
Profile PM
da power pwnerer
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Jul 2006
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Posted: 29th Jun 2008 20:50 Edited at: 29th Jun 2008 20:50
Link
Wow, didn't realize how much reverb I had there lol I just listened to it on my good pc.



-Dan


http://Freewebs.com/noobisoft
Come to Noobisoft's website today!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
Indie PC Games
16
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 1st Apr 2008
Location:
Posted: 29th Jun 2008 21:13
Link
All good Dan, just pull some off and lighten the bass about 15-20% and it should sound a ton better. Can't wait to hear the final product.

Indie


Back to top
Profile PM
da power pwnerer
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Jul 2006
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Posted: 30th Jun 2008 04:40 Edited at: 30th Jun 2008 05:36
Link
Alright, reverb pulled and bass volume reduced. Sounds pretty good

One question though, how can I make it more melodic? It has a pretty good melody now, I think

Uploaded Reverb is on the lowest possible setting.



-Dan


http://Freewebs.com/noobisoft
Come to Noobisoft's website today!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
Rudolpho
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Dec 2005
Location: Sweden
Posted: 1st Jul 2008 01:19 Edited at: 1st Jul 2008 01:21
Link
Yeah, it sounds better.
What I meant with the melody part is that you could add a lead instrument that would play some sort of "main melody".

If you're looking for inspiration, I suggest that you play around with a french horn or a trombone to this track in order to make up some melody. If you do decide to add such a melody, you should probably lower the piano level a bit, so that the two instruments won't conflict.

Edit: Or just use the additional instrument to strenghten the piano's melody, if you wish

"I kören hörs de brummande busarna Björnligan och Gondolen"
Back to top
Profile PM Email Website
da power pwnerer
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Jul 2006
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Posted: 1st Jul 2008 02:05
Link
Oh, I see I will try out those instruments I'm surprised Grandma hasn't commented yet



-Dan


http://Freewebs.com/noobisoft
Come to Noobisoft's website today!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
Grandma
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 26th Dec 2005
Location: Norway, Guiding the New World Order
Posted: 1st Jul 2008 15:05
Link
Quote: "I'm surprised Grandma hasn't commented yet"


oops, sorry.

Yup, definitely improvement. This time around, I didn't find anything annoying.

...happy?

This message was brought to you by Grandma industries.

Making yesterdays games, today!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
da power pwnerer
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Jul 2006
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Posted: 1st Jul 2008 17:25
Link
Thanks lol



-Dan


http://Freewebs.com/noobisoft
Come to Noobisoft's website today!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
Indie PC Games
16
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 1st Apr 2008
Location:
Posted: 1st Jul 2008 18:51
Link
Quote: "Or just use the additional instrument to strenghten the piano's melody, if you wish"


Correct, of a few sound effects... A ton better. Sounds good. Keep it up!

Indie


Back to top
Profile PM
da power pwnerer
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Jul 2006
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Posted: 1st Jul 2008 19:56
Link
Thanks Maybe I'll add a proper ending to the song



-Dan


http://Freewebs.com/noobisoft
Come to Noobisoft's website today!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
Rudolpho
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Dec 2005
Location: Sweden
Posted: 1st Jul 2008 23:25
Link
That I would recommend

"I kören hörs de brummande busarna Björnligan och Gondolen"
Back to top
Profile PM Email Website
Back to top

Login to post a reply

Server time is: 2024-11-23 09:52:08
Your offset time is: 2024-11-23 09:52:08