Well, good work
But seriously, is that the
lowest possible reverb?!
Anyways, the ending part differs out from the beginning pretty well - I would reccommend laying back a bit on the percussions as well there in the end; it sounds a bit odd with the diminuendo to only the piano, but full force on the snare in the background.
Also, the first part is a bit repetative (especially the four piano notes playing over and over; maybe you should lower the pianos level a bit in that first part of the song?)
Also, there is this low woodwind (I couldn't really make out whether it was a bassoon or a bass clarinet?) which again blends in with some outrageous tones here and there, distorting the main setting of the piece.
But on the whole, your work is getting more and more melodical (this one even had a fully functional intro as well as an ending) and one must really say that the orchestration on this song is pretty well made.
Keep at it
"I kören hörs de brummande busarna Björnligan och Gondolen"
