Kron Job
Story: The year is 2506, and former Major Max Brody is serving hard time in a mining work camp on Centauri 12, a fallen hero falsely imprisoned for protecting his soldiers against corrupt military brass. His fortunes change when Brody is discovered to be a "Kron Job" - a human with the capability to survive dimensional travel. In exchange for his freedom, the same regime that imprisoned him offers him one final mission...chase Col. Lex Oxium across the time space continuum and eliminate him before he acts on his diabolical plan to rewrite history and wipe out the human race.
Brody accepts the mission...one that will take him back to early in the second millineum, to Nazi Germany and finally, Ancient Egypt, where he must unravel the mystery of Oxium's plan and stop the destruction of the universe.
Okay -- so this is my first crack at building a game in FPSC. Below are screenshots and attached to this post is the game script for the first level. I'm interested to hear if the humor in the script works (realize it's subjective). I'd also like to here how I can improve the level. Most of all, I'd like to hear from others what they would tell a noob like myself. I've read the manual and have the official community guide. I've discovered some of the important tools - Firma, MagicFPS, Signs, etc. I'd appreciate guidance on how to make the AI work well and what to avoid. Thanks for taking a look at this WIP.
** Big shout out to cosmic prophet - his work is featured heavily in this game **
'Yeah...I'm gonna' have to ask you to come in on Saturday. That'd be great.'