Sorry your browser is not supported!

You are using an outdated browser that does not support modern web technologies, in order to use this site please update to a new browser.

Browsers supported include Chrome, FireFox, Safari, Opera, Internet Explorer 10+ or Microsoft Edge.

Author
Message
maikyy
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 29th Jul 2008
Location: between my front and back door
Posted: 29th Aug 2008 01:34 Edited at: 7th Sep 2008 11:45
hey all i am just busy creating my first full game and i just wan to know what you think of it so here's the storyline:

in this epic battle you are the one who must fight the alien sources to prevent a third world war. can you make it?

sorry for my bad english (i am dutch)
Deathead
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 14th Oct 2006
Location:
Posted: 29th Aug 2008 02:09
Um, if america had alien sources wouldn't they find them and place them in area 51.


"Your greatest teacher is your harshest critic"-Butterfingers
Pain
FPSC Reloaded TGC Backer
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 4th Apr 2007
Location: Lake Orion, MI - USA
Posted: 29th Aug 2008 21:13
thanx Deathhead (for pointing out were jerks) LOL

Most likely we would.. your not allien are u?

Pain

Me = noob

and i love The TGC : )
maikyy
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 29th Jul 2008
Location: between my front and back door
Posted: 30th Aug 2008 01:49
lol yeah i am still working on the storyline i am not that creative

sorry for my bad english (i am dutch)
Punk13
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 7th Oct 2007
Location: In EpikLand!
Posted: 30th Aug 2008 06:56
did you use a template for that pic?


RAMPAGE STOLE MY CHEEZ-ITS!
maikyy
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 29th Jul 2008
Location: between my front and back door
Posted: 30th Aug 2008 11:09
i don't know, somebody else has made it for me so...

sorry for my bad english (i am dutch)
SpyDaniel
20
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 4th Feb 2006
Location: United Kingdom
Posted: 30th Aug 2008 15:37
Don't you already have a thread about this?

Aertic
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 2nd Jul 2007
Location: United Kingdom
Posted: 30th Aug 2008 16:18
... Daniel, you signature... First of a kind I`ve seen yet, also do you have steam?

Anyway, looks nice maikyy.


No doubt'fully the simon cowell of the fpsc section :S
SpyDaniel
20
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 4th Feb 2006
Location: United Kingdom
Posted: 30th Aug 2008 16:32
I do have steam, but I'm not giving my ID out.

Aertic
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 2nd Jul 2007
Location: United Kingdom
Posted: 30th Aug 2008 16:43
Quote: "I do have steam, but I'm not giving my ID out."

Rofl?
are you: Uncle Tusky? lol...


No doubt'fully the simon cowell of the fpsc section :S
SpyDaniel
20
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 4th Feb 2006
Location: United Kingdom
Posted: 30th Aug 2008 17:19
No.. and this isn't msn, oh and you're not getting that either and if you do ill just block you.

maikyy
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 29th Jul 2008
Location: between my front and back door
Posted: 31st Aug 2008 21:59
can you keep the subject about my game plz

sorry for my bad english (i am dutch)
CoffeeGrunt
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 5th Oct 2007
Location: England
Posted: 31st Aug 2008 22:09
Nice game....and nice sig Higgins...too true mate.....

maikyy
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 29th Jul 2008
Location: between my front and back door
Posted: 7th Sep 2008 11:46
okay i have changed my storyline, please tell me if this is better
Quote: "You are the hero…

It is the year 2010 and the war between america
and Russia has just ended.
nobody knew why the Russians started
a war, at least till now.

Russia has found alien sources
and they don't want to share it so
they began a war,
and now you are getting involved
in the story because you have to examine
and destroy the sources in Russia.

Good luck..."


sorry for my bad english (i am dutch)
RedneckRambo
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 19th Oct 2006
Location: Worst state in USA... California
Posted: 8th Sep 2008 06:17 Edited at: 8th Sep 2008 06:19
Quote: "Russia has found alien sources
and they don't want to share it so
they began a war,"

So to remain inconspicuous, they start a war? That doesn't make sense. You should change that.

If they don't want anyone to found out, starting a war would be the last thing they do.

maikyy
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 29th Jul 2008
Location: between my front and back door
Posted: 8th Sep 2008 10:03
yeah i am reading it now and you're right that does'nt make any sense so how about,
russia has found alien sources, but an american spy has found them also,
and then when the american researchers came russia get mad and they killed them, so america has send army troops and that's how the war started

sorry for my bad english (i am dutch)
Deathead
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 14th Oct 2006
Location:
Posted: 8th Sep 2008 20:04
Quote: "thanx Deathhead (for pointing out were jerks) LOL"

I'm actually confused on what you mean.


"Your greatest teacher is your harshest critic"-Butterfingers
Butter fingers
20
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 20th Mar 2006
Location: Mecca
Posted: 9th Sep 2008 01:48
Quote: "It is the year 2010 and the war between america
and Russia has just ended.
nobody knew why the Russians started
a war, at least till now.

Russia has found alien sources
and they don't want to share it so
they began a war,
and now you are getting involved
in the story because you have to examine
and destroy the sources in Russia."


You know how when people need a movie trailer, and they can't think of anything original, they us the "movie trailer guy"?
I have to say I feel it's like that with the Russians and the Nazis. It's like... I need a generic evil nation/group to front the baddies in my story, but I don't really have any ideas so I'll just bang in the russians and that'll have to do... that or the poor old muslims.

Right now there is little to no chance of a war with Russia. Most of the countries with Nuclear capabilites have them as a preventative measure, meaning, no-one will go to war with them because no-one wants to get nuked, but at the same time, if you go to war and you have nukes, you don't really want to use them, because they pretty much {edit} things up.

Your best bet is terrorists or rouge states, but lets be honest, that's been done a million times, and no-one wants to play another shoot-the-arabian-looking-guy-who-we-say-is-a-terrorist-don't-ask-questions-they're-just-terrorists.

Couldn't the aliens have just infiltrated society in general? They could be anyone, anywhere? You start of as that Agent in Russia, because it looks like something is going on there with alien stuff, but then as the story progresses it comes to light that the aliens are infact everywhere, that they have infiltrated society in all areas of the globe...

I'd type more but I'm tired.

Cheese Cake
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 11th Dec 2006
Location: At the bakery
Posted: 9th Sep 2008 02:13
I agree with butters..the russians/nazi/terrorists are used to much in FPS(C) games.
Try to find something more original. Like butters said...that the aliens already infiltrated in society.

Or maybe a different group...you can allways make something up.

maikyy
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 29th Jul 2008
Location: between my front and back door
Posted: 9th Sep 2008 20:13
woow you have skills i must say,
damn butterfingers that's a good story line,
i am going to use that for sure
thanx man

sorry for my bad english (i am dutch)

Login to post a reply

Server time is: 2026-07-23 12:06:39
Your offset time is: 2026-07-23 12:06:39