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3 Dimensional Chat / My First M4 Carbine

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Hunter H111
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 21:13
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Tell me what you think of this model I made yesterday.

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Hunter H111
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 21:16
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And here is the model.

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lazerus
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 21:19
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the cartridge and grip could use some detail but lookin good

and nice one for the download

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Asteric
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 23:04
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hey nice work, all i could say is you need to chamfer the edges on the handle a bit if you are using 3dsm

.....Jake.....
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Posted: 31st Aug 2008 23:20
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Not bad, but the scope looks too hi-poly (well, it looks like imported from other model - no offence)

Make games, not war.
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Hunter H111
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Posted: 1st Sep 2008 08:02
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Actually I made everything from scratch. And now I am working on adding more detail.
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Aertic
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Posted: 1st Sep 2008 13:26
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Quote: "Not bad, but the scope looks too hi-poly"

I can tell that the scope aint high poly, its been smoothed to looks high poly.

Looks good, some parts such as the handle need a little chamfer-ing on it...

Looks good sofar, better then my first.


No doubt'fully the simon cowell of the fpsc section :S
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Hunter H111
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Posted: 1st Sep 2008 21:59
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I add a little detail around the hand grip and clip.

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Quik
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Posted: 2nd Sep 2008 08:52
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i think the grip looks weird O.o anyway nice one

Quik, Quiker than most
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Posted: 2nd Sep 2008 08:55
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Show me a wireframe and I'll critique.


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Hunter H111
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Posted: 3rd Sep 2008 02:22
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@ Alucard94

Here's the wireframe picture.

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lazerus
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Posted: 3rd Sep 2008 22:22 Edited at: 3rd Sep 2008 22:23
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cant spot anything wrong but hay i nackered, and working at the same time

not very good combo

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alpha zero revolutions
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not bad buddy , you got the shape right but you need to add more detail and smooth out the haldle. look at other M4's that people have made as reference.

you should always look at many pictures of the gun that you're going to model so that you know what it should look like when completed.

look at my models and look how the handles are rounded and how detailed they are http://www.snitch-killa.deviantart.com.

if u need help.... just ask
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Jesusaurisrex
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Posted: 7th Sep 2008 20:10
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i think it looks great. keep up the good work.

What do you get when you combine the 2 coolest things ever? JESUSAURISREX!
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Crusader2
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Posted: 21st Nov 2008 21:25
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Does it have hands?

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Crav3
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Posted: 21st Nov 2008 23:08
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Its looks great for a first m4. True that it needs a bit more work on the magazine and grip because it's to boxy. it needs to be rounded off a bit more. Great work keep it up!
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Hunter H111
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Posted: 21st Nov 2008 23:11 Edited at: 21st Nov 2008 23:16
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I actually do have hands as seperate models that I could just put in place, But I plan to do that when I am finished with the gun.

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I don't think I want to put as much detail on the grip area because I plan to use it in an FPS and you would never even see it.
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Posted: 21st Nov 2008 23:38
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Cool, please post a new version when you get them done!

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Hunter H111
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Posted: 21st Nov 2008 23:59
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This is a rough idea on what it will look like with a hand.

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Posted: 22nd Nov 2008 00:14
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Cool! Can't wait until it's done!

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fforgotten studios
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hunter im working on fps games and i wonder if youd like to join also wat did u use to model that
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Hunter H111
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Posted: 22nd Nov 2008 04:12 Edited at: 22nd Nov 2008 04:17
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Can you show me what you have been working on. By the way, I use Wings 3D.
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