It does look better than your other models but again, I have to be a butt and complain about proportions and anatomy
Don't take it harsh
First screen:
Okay first off the breast muscles are way too huge in general, no one has that huge muscles, the abs are too large and too tall down the body and also they are flat, which I doubt anyones abs are. The arms are doing some weird twisting that shouldn't be there, I know that the arm is generally a bit twisted but that's just overkill, and the muscles are in some of the wrong places and also the end of the arm is way too thin in comparison to the other parts of it.
The legs are also too small and thin, but you probably just focus on the torso so I won't take that as a serious critique
Second screen:
This model is a lot better, I've got to admit, the general muscling on the torso is pretty spot on, although I'd say that the abs are a bit too tall but otherwise it looks good, the hip area is too feminine for a male character, don't really know how to describe that but look at some hip reference and you'll see what I mean.
And I don't think anyone has that many abs
Anyways, you show a lot of improvement in sculpting and if you keep at it you'll do great
