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Frankie Pawnage5
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hey guys, frankiepawnage here, i recently got 3ds max and i am gradually learning it from a series of tutorials from 3d buzz.com
Anyway, i decided that as a little practice i would design a very basic weapon, The Mac11.
Tell me what you guys think.

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?

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Punk13
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Posted: 17th Oct 2008 06:06
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Nice!


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Frankie Pawnage5
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Gracias.
Hey punk im aboutnt o send you an e-mail can you try to get back to me by the morning so when i wake up i'll have a nice juicy e-mail to read? LOL, no seriously though, get back to me ASAP

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?
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Posted: 17th Oct 2008 06:40 Edited at: 17th Oct 2008 06:58
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wow that look real familiar, nice work, try makinig the body of the gun wider so you don't see the clip, in the handel, other than that it looks good. altough your missing an ejection port for shells and you folding stock is meshed in to your model. you might be able to fix this trainwreck of a model. best of luck ............lol
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Frankie Pawnage5
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Thanks, Heltor, i'll look into this.

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?
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Posted: 17th Oct 2008 16:41
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looks rly amazing keep it up!

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Looking nice. How many polies is it?

Are you planning on texturing it?

And....dont you need an ingame screenie, in the Models and Media board?

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Posted: 17th Oct 2008 17:51
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looks sweet!

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Frankie Pawnage5
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Posted: 17th Oct 2008 21:39
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@Cheesecake - Well i wasnt planning on getting this one in game, this was just a practice run.

@Quik - Thanks man

@PB - Thanks

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?
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Quote: "Well i wasnt planning on getting this one in game, this was just a practice run."
Then, I don't this is supposed to be in models and media. But, great job!



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Frankie Pawnage5
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Posted: 17th Oct 2008 22:16
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Thanks darimc

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?
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Frankie Pawnage5
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Posted: 17th Oct 2008 22:42
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Added a laser, flashlight and a silencer

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?

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Posted: 17th Oct 2008 23:04
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bad ace!

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Posted: 17th Oct 2008 23:50
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BUt....how many polies are these?

And also...like darimc said. Than this doesnt belongs in the models and media thread.

So it should be moved over to the 3d chat..
Which is better for you, cause than you can post whatever you want to post.
And also it doesnt have to relate to FPSC.

I still think its a very nice model!

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Wireframe?
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Wire-frame when you get the chance, please.
Also you're quite good, but some things are out of porpotion. And you're adding too many attatchables that I could call it a whore. lol =)


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Umm.. May I ask for ask for a side, front and top view? And a Wireframe.. Perspectives don't help I know you want it to look fancy but for me to comment on its shape and stuff is quite hard at a angle.


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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 04:49
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Frankie just so you dont get anymore model and media complaints, just send it through entity workshop as a static entity until you can get it fully rigged, you did a good job on the model, now lets see if you can texture this SOB!


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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 04:54
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Sure, Here ya go.

all different views:

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?

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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 04:55 Edited at: 18th Oct 2008 04:56
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wireframe



@Punk - yeah i'll texture it in a little while, im a little busy right nwo, but i sure will also, did you get my e-mail?

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?
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I think you forgot to attach the wireframe shot...

Best.

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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 16:45
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oh yeah, sorry lol here it is

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?

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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 18:22
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An in game screenshot is required otherwise I'll have to move this to 3D Chat (or else it will be locked).

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Frankie Pawnage5
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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 19:33
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well you can move it over to there for now i guess, when i get the time to get it textured i'll get it in game

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?
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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 19:39
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Quote: "Frankie just so you dont get anymore model and media complaints"

No ones complaing, all were doing is complementing and giving feedback that he deserves.
when doing art we should aim for perfection/realisim, if you're hiddenly quoting to me that I called it a whore due to the number attatchments, i`m saying that, the amount of attactments on it is large, and no weapon like a machine pistol should have that much...


Anyway the model looks good! better then me at moddeling submachine guns.


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Quote: "the amount of attactments on it is large, and no weapon like a machine pistol should have that much..."

thats not really true, plenty of special ops and people who need to go on a silent mission to that.

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?
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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 20:16
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No Matuka i was telling him that instead of getting complaints about nan in game shot (Like the models and media board requires) i told him to just send it through entity workshop and take an in game screen shot. That way he can keep the thread opened over here in the fpsc section, sorry i didnt make it clearer


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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 20:20 Edited at: 18th Oct 2008 23:44
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Quote: "thats not really true, plenty of special ops and people who need to go on a silent mission to that."

I mean there one too many on it. Plus it would be rather bulky with three/four on it and as sometimes you would hold a small spare bit it in this case where the flashlight is, it would make it harder to use.
here is a example using this "crappily" drawn image.

http://www.picpanda.com/viewer.php?file=sr5o4h5amumr5u61i8k.png

As you can see the attatchable thats under the space of the gun is obstructing the user to hold it, thus meaning he will have to use one hand making it harder to use and dropping the accuracy of it, which is a important thing to have.

Anyway whatever, up to you I guess.


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Posted: 18th Oct 2008 21:16 Edited at: 18th Oct 2008 21:17
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I think he is trying to make this. here is a good referance pic frankie, the silencer is often used as a foregrip on this model.

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Frankie Pawnage5
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Here is the texture version, not that great, will edit it tomorrow a little more.

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?

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WOW...Frankie Pawnage5, You did a Awesome job on your model! keep up the good work.

Cheers,
Tanya.

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Frankie Pawnage5
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Thanks a million Tanya
Tomorrow, i will be showing the Golden texture

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?
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That looks pretty high poly for what it is. For example your gun barrely only needs one height segment, not as many as it has. The body itself looks pretty dense as well.

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Nice


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Quote: "That looks pretty high poly for what it is. For example your gun barrely only needs one height segment, not as many as it has"

I have to agree...
And some of mine C&C (see image):

-Green- there's some diffrence between your model's stock and the real one. Yours looks like it had 2 layers, which is wrong.

-Red- the thing-that-moves-while-shooting (dunno the name, sorry ) could be just a cylinder that is narrow in the top.

-Blue- The things like screws or thread (? dunno again, sorry for my crappy english) on the barrel could be done on texture or normal map, and the barrel itself looks like it had <8 sides. If it's true, then you should make it have more sides rather than screws on your model etc.

Anyway: It's good that it's not a cartboard cut-out even if some parts look like it.

Make games, not war.

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Het Frankie just to let you know cool gun really nice and I just sent you a email.

Thanks

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