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3 Dimensional Chat / My MP5 revisit

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Toasty Fresh
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Posted: 25th Nov 2008 09:45 Edited at: 26th Nov 2008 08:13
Okay, I have recently tried learning how to use Blender, and this is pretty much my first model with it, SamHH has seen a bad WIP of something that I will never look at again.
The last time I posted about my skills at modeling MP5's, here's what it looked like:



Now, here is the one I am modeling now:


C&C appreciated.

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Alucard94
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Posted: 25th Nov 2008 19:03
Can't see anything wrong right now, looks pretty damn good. I'll wait until it's finished and shown in wireframe before I critique.


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Posted: 25th Nov 2008 20:54
The one made with Milkshape could use some more detail, other than that its great, the one made with blender is freaking awesome, cant wait to see it finished.

dude if you really want a turkey sandwich, then make one, and make ham.sdaF?
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Posted: 25th Nov 2008 21:00
Wow. Haven't got words for this. It's improved A LOT.

Best.

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Aertic
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Posted: 25th Nov 2008 21:37
Nice H&K Mp5... (Looks extremely fammiliar to a Heckler & Koch MP5A2 So thats why I`m presuming it is.)

Oh, and by the way, you may want to use this as a refrence, thats if you're doing a H&KMP5A2.

http://image.hazardstrip.com/ss/srends/32130.jpg

Its a rather accurately moddeled Mp5a2. Hope it helps.


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Posted: 25th Nov 2008 22:41
Thankyou for all the comments.

@Alucard: It is finished now, Although I pretty much have it in pieces to texture it.

@tjaabee: Thanks!

@Frankie: Thanks, the Milskhape one was like my first ever MS3D model.

@Matuka: I'm actually modelling it off an old toy model, so I would assume it's pretty accurate.

I'll post some more when I get home.

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Posted: 26th Nov 2008 08:14
First post updated with complete model. The suppressed version will most likely be available separately. That's if it ever gets finished.

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Posted: 26th Nov 2008 08:17
Wire shot? Looks good so far.


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Toasty Fresh
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Posted: 26th Nov 2008 08:27 Edited at: 26th Nov 2008 08:31
Sure.


BTW, anyone who can help: http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=140586&b=3

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The Master Dinasty
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Posted: 26th Nov 2008 10:26
AN AVEREGE MP5 DOES NOT HAVE A SILLENCER hehe

Beacause massa is the master!
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Posted: 26th Nov 2008 10:32
Umm... What was the point of that? An MP5 can attach a suppressor, the variant you are thinking of would be the MP5SD.

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Posted: 26th Nov 2008 16:25
The edges look just fine. Good job! Now just slap a good texture on there.


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Posted: 26th Nov 2008 16:55
Nice stuff you got there , keep it up !

Can't wait to see it with the texture.

Best

Somebody please give me a job...
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Posted: 26th Nov 2008 18:06
A fair amount of unneeded geometery and groups blowing through other groups which I think is going to cause you extra hassle when you go to UV it. The taper on the bottom of the telestock is too sharp but otherwise looks good overall.
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Posted: 26th Nov 2008 22:40
Thanks, all.

@Alucard and Strelok: I've started the texture, but I'm not willing to do anymore until I figure out how to display the texture on my model in Blender.

@Errant: I see what you mean with the stock now, I'll try and fix it up. And with the geometry, yes, the UV is pretty annoying. Thanks!

Keep 'em coming!

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Posted: 2nd Dec 2008 04:59
w00t isnt blender on vista a joy and dont you love that DBP doesnt work right on it

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Posted: 2nd Dec 2008 07:22
Quote: "w00t isnt blender on vista a joy and dont you love that DBP doesnt work right on it
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Maybe you should stop trolling and start keeping on topic?


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Toasty Fresh
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Posted: 2nd Dec 2008 10:26
Could be a good idea.

Well, as for progress on this, I am working on the texture, but I am not going to do anymore until I sort out this material business.

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Posted: 4th Dec 2008 01:08
This looks bloody excellent, I can't wait to see what this looks like with a texture... If you got this into fpsc I would love to AirMod it

Keep up the excellent work


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