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3 Dimensional Chat / Revolver (Practice Model)

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darimc
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Posted: 2nd Dec 2008 02:41
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Here is a model that I did just for practice, a revolver. I made sure to not make this one boxy and try to add detail, while keeping it low poly. Here is a comparison to my old model.

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I know that there is no space in between the frame and the cylinder, but since this is just practice and not for any games, please ignore it

P.S. I am looking for constructive criticism, not rudeness or bashing please.



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Deathead
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I would make the under barrel more thinner.



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darimc
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Posted: 2nd Dec 2008 12:39
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Ok, I'll do that. Just a couple more things I would like to note, if you look in the second picture, you can see that there is a safety, but it doesn't really show up in the render. And I know I don't have the trigger or trigger guard yet.



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darimc
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Posted: 2nd Dec 2008 20:28
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No other comments?



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Strelok
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Posted: 2nd Dec 2008 20:55 Edited at: 2nd Dec 2008 20:55
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looks good , how many polys is it ? Could you post a wire frame please ?

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Alucard94
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Posted: 2nd Dec 2008 21:03
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Looks pretty good, although if you're trying to make it look like a Webley revolver I'd say the handle is too thick.


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darimc
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Posted: 2nd Dec 2008 21:28
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Thanks for the comments and suggestions, here is a wire frame.



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darimc
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Posted: 3rd Dec 2008 12:44
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No one is posting, please post some comments and crits.



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puppyofkosh
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I'd also say the handle is too thick.
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darimc
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Posted: 3rd Dec 2008 13:07 Edited at: 3rd Dec 2008 13:07
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Really? it's only this thick.




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Dr Parsnips
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it looks good man, one thing i will say is that there is a line of vertices down the handle that isn't needed, but thats just me being picky!! lol

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darimc
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Quote: "it looks good man, one thing i will say is that there is a line of vertices down the handle that isn't needed, but thats just me being picky!! lol
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Thanks, I will try to reduce the handle.



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puppyofkosh
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Maybe it isn't too thick...
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darimc
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Ok, lol.



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Strelok
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Posted: 4th Dec 2008 13:51
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mesh looks nice.. can't wait to see it textured.

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Red Eye
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nice man, I am posting hihi


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