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3 Dimensional Chat / UMP45 - Been working on it the whole afternoon

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Toasty Fresh
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2008 09:48 Edited at: 22nd Dec 2008 09:48
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Hi.

Here's my latest piece of work, another UMP. I've been working on it the whole afternoon (for the sole reason that I have nothing to do) and I'm pretty pleased. I'll probably sell it on TurboSquid or something. I've no plans to UV Map it, texture it, or rig it.



C&C appreciated.


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Crav3
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2008 10:25
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Wow, Thats some great work Toasty, theres not much to critique here. The only thing would be applying some smoothing groups to the round areas such as the scope and silencer etc so it looks more round.
Good stuff, You should have more afternoons with nothing to do! ahah

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Posted: 22nd Dec 2008 10:26
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Word of advice, if you are going to sell it on Turbosquid, get a texture on it. I would be surprised if anyone bought this model with out it, as there a plenty of guns on there that are rigged and textured.

Good luck with it.

I give ip with thos baner fing as it never seems to work for me. I woll now stop wasting mu time.
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2008 10:28
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Impressive looking gun! A lot of detail in there, good job.

How many polies?

Quote: "I've been working on it the whole afternoon"


I've been modeling guns for hours too.
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Posted: 22nd Dec 2008 10:30
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Awesome! What do you use to make 3d?

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Posted: 22nd Dec 2008 10:37
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Quote: "Word of advice, if you are going to sell it on Turbosquid, get a texture on it."


Aw, bugger.

Quote: "How many polies?"


2,492 vertices.

Quote: "Awesome! What do you use to make 3d?"


Blender.

Thanks for all the kind comments.


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Posted: 22nd Dec 2008 11:56
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Soften some of those hard edges and you'll be good to go. Could you post a wireframe to show some geometry?

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Posted: 22nd Dec 2008 12:31
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There.

Quote: "Soften some of those hard edges and you'll be good to go."


I'm not really very linguistic when it comes to modeling, which ones are the hard edges?


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Woha... Nice job, mate. But I think it would look even awesome-ier with a texture on, anyway, keep it up!

Best.

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Posted: 22nd Dec 2008 23:58
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Quote: "I'm not really very linguistic when it comes to modeling, which ones are the hard edges?"


I've circled the hard edges. What program are you using? You should be able to apply smoothing groups to the hard edges which doesn't add any extra poly's, it gives the illusion that its already smooth.
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Posted: 23rd Dec 2008 00:13
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Ah, I get what you mean.


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just click on the object, go to the little square button at the bottom with highlighted corners, and click set smooth...

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The model looks pretty good, better than a lot of models I've been seeing lately on this board. You have some strange mesh in some areas (Mainly some parts looking a bit too organic for their own good). Also the scope, while very cool, is a bit too wide. (I think, although for all I know, that might be the way the gun actually looks, it just sort of stood out for me.
Also you have a tiny bit of areas that you probably didn't need to detail as much.
But overall good job man.


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Quote: "better than a lot of models I've been seeing lately on this board. "


Especialy mine...

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Posted: 23rd Dec 2008 00:51
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Thanks all.

Quote: "Also you have a tiny bit of areas that you probably didn't need to detail as much."


Meh, it's more of a recreational project than a proper one that I'll be intent on selling.


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Quote: "2,492 vertices."


That's how many individual points there are on the model. People are looking for the number of faces


www.aeriagames.com <-They have some decent ones
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I'll take a guess and say that it's about... 623 faces maybe?
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Posted: 23rd Dec 2008 16:57
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How can you guess a poly count.


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Well, if he is using quads, couldn't you just divide the vertice number by 4?



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and for tris divide by three?

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I doubt it's only quads though. Most models aren't.


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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 08:07
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Quote: "623 faces"


Try 2602.


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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 10:51
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Quote: "Well, if he is using quads, couldn't you just divide the vertice number by 4?"


That would assume that no polys are sharing vertices though.
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