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3 Dimensional Chat / Concept Weapons WIP

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Asteric
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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 17:55
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Hey guys im back, after over a month without being able to post(some strange error) i finally can, so along with my new segment pack, i have been working on some sci-fi(ish) weapons

so first of is the rifle

1346 polys

still have a few minor ajustments like the sights etc.

here is the first view w/wireframe

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Asteric
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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 17:56
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second shot...

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petsall
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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 18:03
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Your handle has too many polys

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Asteric
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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 18:06
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Quote: "Your handle has too many polys"


you think? i mean after showing the model to other people earlier they all said that the handle needed to be smoothed, so i did that and applied a smooth modifier, now in that picture the handle is smoothed with 1 iteration, and sadly i cant go lower so have you got any other suggestions?

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petsall
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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 18:34
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just bevel it

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Asteric
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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 19:00
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ok here is the latest update, the new additions still need smoothing but i thought id show my progress, added a scope and a grip

poly count 2043

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Alucard94
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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 19:18
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Looks pretty alright. The handle and all the cylinders are way too high poly though.


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Asteric
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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 21:09
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@Alucard94, yeah i was just thinking the same, i will decrease the number of sides for the cylinders

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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 21:20
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update: decreased the amount of sides on the cylinders, also chamfered the body to give it a bit more shape

poly count : 2001

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Aertic
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Posted: 24th Dec 2008 21:39
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Magazine could do with being curved.
Redo the handle so its a block, thats been Beveled and at the back it has a single line going down it thats out by a little bit... Can't really get a picture of what I mean, so you'll have to do your best...


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tjaabee
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I belive it looks ok, but as others had said, the handle seems too high poly, and it doesn't really fit in, as it looks very organic. Keep it up though!

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Sushi01
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Posted: 27th Dec 2008 00:36
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nice model dude
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Maniac Modeler
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Posted: 28th Dec 2008 03:20
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The forehandle seams to be a bit close to the magazine, and the rife looks to me like an smg, because it looks a little small.

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Posted: 28th Dec 2008 14:56
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to me it looks like a rifle, after-all there are rifles the size of smg's now.....

http://www.instructables.com/files/deriv/FR1/5YG5/FEAHE7B1/FR15YG5FEAHE7B1.MEDIUM.jpg

http://www.riflestocks.com/images06/ARBP/ARBP-ss.jpg
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Posted: 31st Dec 2008 06:09
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Wow thats sweet

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