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3 Dimensional Chat / Civilian

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Sushi01
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Posted: 21st Jan 2009 04:34
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Hi all, here is a Profile of the Civilian character I finished for Bergice's game City of Kings, tell me what you all think....

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Alucard94
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Posted: 21st Jan 2009 10:52
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Everything looks really great except the shoes which really just look strange and the sharp folds on the pants.


Alucard94, the member of the future of the past.
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Cheese Cake
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Posted: 21st Jan 2009 11:02
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The model is nice!
maybe add a bit dirt on his shirt.

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bergice
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Posted: 21st Jan 2009 16:16
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Good work, i am working on it now.

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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 05:19
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Here are a few things I find odd or that I think might improve it:

1) beltloops!

2) if those aren't sweat pants, they should be equipped with a fly, and the cuffs should hang loose. I'm not sure as the texture looks like it could be either slacks or sweats, but with that collared shirt and belt, slacks would fit the look better.

3) the shoes do look a bit odd

4) I don't know the scenario of the game, so unless times are pretty rough, don't add any dirt to his clothes; normally people keep very clean, and some have a phobia of dirt


Remember those old guys? They made epic renders, I think one of them was called DaVinci, and all they used was MS Paint. Sometimes it's just skill....
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Sushi01
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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 05:49
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Quote: "1) beltloops!"


lol

Quote: "3)the shoes do look a bit odd"


hes wearing Nike Air renaissance 3000's, I thought you all knew!

lol I was aware of the shoes even before I uploaded him, also I will change his belt to a rope that ties around his waist, that seems more fitting.
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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 06:03 Edited at: 22nd Jan 2009 06:04
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Quote: "also I will change his belt to a rope that ties around his waist, that seems more fitting."


ok so they are sweats then the only complaint I have (apart from that the shirt, looking also like a sweatshirt, shouldn't have a collar like that, it should be more like the cuffs' edges) is that the shoes are too shiny; for sports shoes like those it seems like they're normally made out of more of a .... not-shiny material, you know? so if you could just edit the material for them to make them look more fabric or leather-like (i think i'm looking for "upholstery"-esque material o_O) then it would look better


Remember those old guys? They made epic renders, I think one of them was called DaVinci, and all they used was MS Paint. Sometimes it's just skill....
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