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3 Dimensional Chat / Hk-146 First Gun Model in Max

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Game maker wannabe
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Posted: 21st Jan 2009 22:15 Edited at: 21st Jan 2009 22:25
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Hi, I am quite pleased with this one, so I thought I would share it.

It's not done, I'll posts some updates.

Here it is now.



Please leave comments and crit.
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prasoc
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Posted: 21st Jan 2009 22:20
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The gun is too wide. The grip/mag slot etc are all too fat.
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Posted: 21st Jan 2009 22:25
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Point taken, cheers.

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Game maker wannabe
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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 00:02 Edited at: 22nd Jan 2009 00:04
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Here, I think I am done with the model.



I'll get a polycount and wireframe if you want tommorow after school, right now im going to sleep.
Tell me what you think.

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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 04:20
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very nice for your first model, keep it up
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Alucard94
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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 06:23
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It's currently very boxy, try rounding things off more and it'll look better.


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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 07:46
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It's Basically just the smoothing groups that need editing, I think rounding it off isn't absolutely necessary. I'm not sure but I don't think the barrel is meant to be that skinny.

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Toasty Fresh
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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 13:32
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Looks great, bevel the grip and all that stuff a bit.


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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 20:57
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Cheers guys, I'll try to improve it on what you say.

@Crav3, I havn't made any smoothing groups as of yet.

@Skeptis, I have made a fair amount of models in the past, although most were made in Wings 3D, this was my first gun model in Max.

I would like to get it finished, but my laptop has just failed (again) after 1 month + of servicing.
3rd time it has failed.

Thanks for the comments.

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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 21:06
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Quote: "It's currently very boxy, try rounding things off more and it'll look better."
That's your catch phrase. Model looks great for your first, just get those smoothing groups going.


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Posted: 22nd Jan 2009 22:13
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I thought I would take this opportunity to post my anvil, which was going into my MMO. That was before the setbacks (laptop)
It was my first model to be modeled and mapped in Max.



It is about 100 polys I dunno, because I can't check.

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Aaagreen
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Posted: 23rd Jan 2009 18:24
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Again with the boxy

Try using bevel on the edges that need it.

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Posted: 23rd Jan 2009 20:37
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But it is for a mmo so I think it is fine.

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Posted: 23rd Jan 2009 22:03 Edited at: 23rd Jan 2009 22:10
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Ye Aaagreen I would of liked to add more polys, but it is/was for an MMO so I tried to keep it very low as there would be a lot of polys overall.

I reckon I will make a more realistic one.
Any comments on the texture on the anvil?

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