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Asteric
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Posted: 29th Jan 2009 20:14
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Hey, here is my latest WIP, a sci-fi rifle

Please note that it is still very basic, as i just started yesterday, but i posted for some ideas/criticism. Thanks

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Game maker wannabe
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Posted: 29th Jan 2009 21:21
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Wow this is great, would you give us a shot of the whole scene?

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Asteric
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Posted: 29th Jan 2009 21:24
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that is the whole scene at the minute but i plan to add more, but i need some ideas

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Matty3962
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Posted: 29th Jan 2009 21:31
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Looks great, and as I've said, make it a flamethrower and add a little gas pipe thing to it. I'll try annotating a screenshot of it sometime, to show you what I mean.

Keep it up.



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Asteric
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Posted: 29th Jan 2009 21:57
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here is the wip of the flame mod matty

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Matty3962
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Posted: 29th Jan 2009 21:58
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yay, its looking better already. ^_^

Try adding some pipes down the side, just for general effect



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puppyofkosh
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Posted: 29th Jan 2009 22:01
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Is that by any chance based on the rifle in Aliens?

Looks cool though.
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Asteric
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Posted: 29th Jan 2009 22:03
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how did you know? Lol yeah it is, i loved the films, and i thought the rifle looked very cool

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wind27382
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Posted: 30th Jan 2009 14:03
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looks really coll. great modeling. I can't wait to see the whole thing when it's finished.

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Asteric
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Posted: 30th Jan 2009 16:37
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thanks wind, i think a clean uv map and texturing is gunna be my biggest issue

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Oolite
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Posted: 30th Jan 2009 18:03
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If you want any real critisicm you should post the rifle on its own from multiple angles with wireframes and UV map so we can check its consistency and flow.
Can't really see much of the actual rifle now because its just a series of grey shapes.

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Alucard94
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Posted: 30th Jan 2009 19:23
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Coincidentally enough I was just going to post almost exactly the same thing as Oolite.


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Matty3962
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Posted: 30th Jan 2009 20:07
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If you can get a clean uv map, I'm usually available for some texturing



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Zuka
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Posted: 30th Jan 2009 22:36
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Matty3962, you taste coins?
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Shaun Of The Dead
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Posted: 31st Jan 2009 10:16
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zuka, can you stop making pointless posts on other peoples threads?

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CoffeeGrunt
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Posted: 31st Jan 2009 10:36
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?

Looks pretty good...what's the poly count?

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-Frankie Boyle, on Mock the Week
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Quote: "Coincidentally enough I was just going to post almost exactly the same thing as Oolite."

Great minds...

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lazerus
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get shot in series...

## whistels and walks away ##

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