maby you should slow down?
start taking your time with some of these models, your like an interactive hyperactive squrrile darting around trying to find more nuts, or your case applause.
start taking some time to produce a polished model then post a work flow, renders from begining to end type thing, like cheesecake did with his flamethrower.
THEN ask for critism or if your stuck on an area or cant decide or need help, then post.
Am saying this cause that is pretty much a 5 second model in the scheme of things.
Now to appeal to the interactive hyperactive squrrile who will only fully take in to these picture slides and probably ignore all that i have written above
some how i think hell still manage to miss the point...
but thats why where still here...