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Dark Master Ev
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Posted: 13th Mar 2009 05:17
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here is a tank model i made in truespace.as you can probably guess I'm no pro modeler i know it is really bad but I'm probably remake it better later.

any comments + C&C are greatly appreciated.

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Aelin
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Posted: 13th Mar 2009 05:45 Edited at: 13th Mar 2009 05:46
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The cylinders that form the barrels are considerably highpoly considering that the body is so low poly. Try using 8 sided cylindersfor the barrels instead.

Other than that, it looks pretty good. I recommend improving the texture.

I'm not looking to join any amateur teams, nor do I take requests.
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Posted: 13th Mar 2009 06:02 Edited at: 13th Mar 2009 06:02
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K well you asked for C&C.
It looks like 3 tapezoidal prisims slapped together with two attempts at tank treads with a horrible texture job with high poly turrets.
Please take more than 10 minutes on a model before posting it for C&C or else you will get responses like this.
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Dark Master Ev
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Posted: 13th Mar 2009 06:30
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ok ill work on it more before i post again thanks

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Alucard94
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Posted: 13th Mar 2009 16:22
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Wow what is with you people and being hostile? The guy has modeled something and wanted comments on it that's all.
It is a very simple model but I don't think it look necessarily bad for that, and the texture has a lot of potential, it's no where near horrible, it's just the UV stretching that's messing it up.


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Posted: 13th Mar 2009 16:28
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I'm not being hostile, he asked for C&C and im stating my opinion of the model.
I'm sorry if i was a bit harsh, but i stand by my opinion that one should spend a little more time on a model before posting it.
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Posted: 13th Mar 2009 17:01 Edited at: 13th Mar 2009 17:02
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You seem to have opinions and constructive criticism mixed up since I don't think "horrible texture job" suits as constructive criticism, you need to say how for him to improve as well.


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Dark Master Ev
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Posted: 16th Mar 2009 20:07 Edited at: 20th Mar 2009 04:28
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i'll keep trying.

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I like the design pretty much, but it needs serious detailing. Also some got technical issues, such as the body of the tank is very low poly, but the cannons are horrible high poly. Decide what you are going to use this model for, and adjust them equaly to your needs.

I just love the idea for the center to be hidden between the treads, useful and looks cool.
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