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FPSC Classic Models and Media / Two Sci-fi Models

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Shaun Of The Dead
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Posted: 5th Apr 2009 21:01
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Hello,
Here are two of my first Sci-fi Models made entirely by me


The Larger Entity is a Stack of Servers/Terminal Thingy

The smaller entity is a computer/console object.



Give me your Crit! (Please )

Shaun



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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 5th Apr 2009 21:08
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Look pretty good, but to give it that extra 'detailed' look, go to www.cg-textures.com and overlay some metal textures will make them look great ! And good work.

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Shaun Of The Dead
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Posted: 5th Apr 2009 21:10
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i know, im having 2 versions, a more grungy version, and what it is now (mabe with an overlay) thanks for your feedback



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Asteric
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Posted: 6th Apr 2009 02:48
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lookin good, just need some grunge on there and it will look great

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Toasty Fresh
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Posted: 7th Apr 2009 03:22
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The textures wrent very detailed, but I like them! The cartoony feel of them is kinda nostalgic, which I really like.
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FPSXtreme
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The meshes themselves are good, and the textures arent bad but take a little more time on the shading. It seems that the areas around the edges are too semetrical. Randomise it some. And remember: As a freind told me a long time ago (locrian), Even a brand new toy in the box has a little dust on it. Dirty em up a some. Other than that not bad. Keep it up. FPSxtreme
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Shaun Of The Dead
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Posted: 7th Apr 2009 18:21
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ok guys, i have added some grunge to the servers, and created a sci-fi Style ramp.



Crit please!



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Black Rebel Heart
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Posted: 7th Apr 2009 18:40
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I APPROVE
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Asteric
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Posted: 7th Apr 2009 19:58
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lookin good, keep it up

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Shaun Of The Dead
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Posted: 7th Apr 2009 23:29
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Thanks guys, Im going to add a few more models within the week.

Next one coming tomorrow!



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Shaun Of The Dead
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Posted: 11th Apr 2009 17:00
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Heres another 2, sorry for the wait, hope you enjoy.


Shaun





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Seth Black
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Posted: 11th Apr 2009 17:10
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...the ramp is my favorite of the three.

The electronics still have texture issues, that make them look less than real. They look Photoshopped

Look around your environment at your computer, your microwave, your television...and you'll begin to see what I mean, if you compare them to these current screenshots.

Overall, these are a great effort, to be certain! With some focus and proper attention to detail, these can easily become must-haves for anyone's media library.


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Shaun Of The Dead
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Posted: 11th Apr 2009 17:17
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thanks, but i saw something wrong with my ramp, the whole side has gone green, thats why i showed a small amount of it, because the left side was green, im going to try to fix it, or make another version.

Anyways, thanks for your input



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Shaun Of The Dead
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Posted: 13th Apr 2009 00:28
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New image including the two new ramps



BTW, i am thinking on selling this pack once its complete, has anyone got any ideas on price? and if you would pay for it.

Shaun



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Seth Black
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Posted: 13th Apr 2009 17:55
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...for retail, you should really fine-tune the textures.

Most on this forum could duplicate what's shown within a matter of minutes. Doubtful this pack is going to garner much revenue, without refinement.

Good luck to you, in all of your future endeavors...


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The Next
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Posted: 13th Apr 2009 22:24
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Nice stuff mate keep it coming

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