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Red Eye
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Red Eye


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Finnaly I think my game is good enough to post it here. (Atleast, I hope so).
You probably already have seen this is my signature:

Quote: "Red Eye - The Game: Work In Progress - W.I.P. "


Now you can see what I was doing. Enjoy the ride.
PS: Tell me what you think about the threadbanner.

Info of Game:


Style: Don't Know Yet (This type of game is barely seen.)
Made by: Red Eye
Started with Project: 3 Weeks Ago.

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The Story: (Full Story = 5 A4 Pages Long.)


3004:

The beginning of the end. The human race is on the brink of destruction. The enemy is their close neighbour.
The green enemy. The enemy who we have fought for many years
The enemy who let cities fall, countries fall. Who let humanity fall.
Here children. Here, tentacles, long enough to strangle the tallest buildings in the world, keep the human captured in the magnificent world called Space. For over a 100 years they have been captured by their greatest enemy.

"This has happened before, long time ago when cold and ice ruled the world. The human being survived."

Diary:

25 October 2987:

"Everything is going fine. Captain Strelok can handle the situation, and sends every 2 months a group of 7 well trained soldiers and 3 scientists to the ground, to do research. Till now nothing has been found. At least, not the heart of the enemy.
We do find a lot of different species, new plants, animals, and ... and ..., I can't believe it, but a soldier said that he found people down there. Scientists say that that is impossible, as there is too much oxygen for a human being. A body would burn of the acids, or something.
People don't believe in God or the difference between heaven and hell. Surviving is a subject in which people now believe. For me surviving is a goal.
Logbook 989768, Thorn Peterson."

26 November 2987:

"Last week Captain Strelok sent another group to earth. Something bad had happened. 5 Badly wounded, 3 in coma. And 2 are ... are dead. Batt told his story. He told us he saw a ghost, followed by a black shadow, and then, everything went black. When he woke up... well... that’s when we found them. Some say there are creatures, devils, children of the enemy, down there. And... nevermind.

The new global statistics of Planet Earth are:
(I will upload a full report as always on a MicroUSB.)

Oxygen: 84.56 %
Temperature: 89 Degrees

The temperature has increased with 7.3 Degrees in a month. The oxygen levels remain stable.
Logbook 989800, Thorn Peterson."

SS-City-13 is the only place where the human race can stand out. Fear is what keeps people alert.
Around 150.000 people live in SS-City-13. This is the place where the only hope left lies. The hope for surviving this terrible nightmare. This so called, green enemy. Some people haven't even seen it yet, those are just the civilians from SS-City-13. They live there as normal people, living their care free lives. For them, Earth is just a fairy tale.

1 January 2988:

"This is a new Year for all of us. Captain Strelok wants to send 15 soldiers to the ground, and 5 scientists. He is collecting our best soldiers to go down there. The ones that have never been there, the ones that don't know how it is down there. I know, I have seen it, I have seen the great walls of the enemy, and the enormous tentacles reaching for the sky....

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I will upload a .PDF with the full story when finished. And please say if I made a mistake, because I'm not so good in English. I am Dutch.

Screenshots:


Newest Screenshots:

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/2091/screen1xya.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/1900/screen2e.jpg
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/6599/screen3q.jpg
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http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8906/screen9g.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/2579/screen10p.jpg
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/3329/screen11.jpg
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/3631/screen12.jpg

Oldest Screenshots:

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3791/screen1xnv.jpg
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/3162/screen2h.jpg
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/4849/screen7vpq.jpg
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/1046/screen3wth.jpg
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/7393/screen4m.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3135/screen5q.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7105/screen6x.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4374/33963441.jpg
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6172/50286686.jpg
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8569/30326222.jpg
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http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1728/30099946.jpg
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/3251/38074214.jpg
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6256/76791510.jpg
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/5994/38307154.jpg
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/4461/90968287.jpg
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/4691/21358522.jpg
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/1111/60916156.jpg
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/3767/30616547.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4281/47183139.jpg
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/6757/59522434.jpg
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/9849/screen2f.jpg
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/8222/screen3smt.jpg
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3310/screen4qxz.jpg

Trailers:


- Youtube Trailer: (Very Experimental!!!) 1# Red Eye Trailer

Beta Testers:
- S4Real
- Paul112
- EyeBall Games
- Robert F

PS: Strelok, I use your name. If you don't want I understand and will change it to something else.

This is still W.I.P., so C&C are welcome.

That's it for now,

Thanks,

Red Eye,

Red Eye Productions


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Posted: 11th Apr 2009 16:21
Nice, I like the atmosphere of the screens!
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Posted: 11th Apr 2009 16:23
Yes, very nice atmosphere.

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Posted: 11th Apr 2009 17:51 Edited at: 11th Apr 2009 17:54
wow great job redeye cant wait to see more. The games on here are getting better. everyone is on there A, game.I like the story line and the hud. cool banner.

more than what meets the eye
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Posted: 11th Apr 2009 18:23
The game looks great, however I would add a range of different plants all different heights some it looks more wild and interesting because they look too uniform at the moment. Also they seem to be growing out of concrete, make some small soil piles and put them under the plants so it looks more realistic. Other than that good work, you have my interest.
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Posted: 11th Apr 2009 19:20 Edited at: 11th Apr 2009 21:54
Thanks for all the good comments...

@SGJB: Thanks for the critic... gonna work on that now.

EDIT: Expect some new screens soon!!!


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Posted: 11th Apr 2009 22:27
Wow..this looks really good!! Keep up the great work!

BTW: I like the hud
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Posted: 12th Apr 2009 03:46
Holy Bejesus! you have bad grammer, but yet, can still write amazing stories, and create perfect fps games.

Great Work!
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Posted: 12th Apr 2009 10:27 Edited at: 13th Apr 2009 20:03
should i say omg or should i say .... awesome is what it is

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Posted: 12th Apr 2009 14:24 Edited at: 12th Apr 2009 14:24
Thanks for all the good comments...

@Bugsy: My grammer isnt good indeed, I am dutch. Glad you like it.

EDIT: Expect some new screens soon!!!


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Posted: 12th Apr 2009 18:37
Nice job, bit dark but good.

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Posted: 12th Apr 2009 18:42
Nice work red eye the only issue I see is the lives need to be a little bit lower.

Best s4real

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Posted: 12th Apr 2009 19:18
Looks great man! I really like the 6th pic in your last post. I can't wait to play.


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Posted: 12th Apr 2009 20:04
Great job! I red the whole story and cant wait to play it! Dont worry about youre grammar, I'm finnish and if i make a grammar mistake here, ppl dont get mad at me ;D

Straight from Finland ;P
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Posted: 12th Apr 2009 20:18
I'm loving the screens, it has beautiful atmosphere...

The story's grammar is a little broken, but that's not important. I'd change the HUD though, it's too...simple, perhaps fill the semi-circle bit with slightly opaque black?

"Give a man a fish, and he'll eat for a day. Give a man a fishing rod, and he'll break it up into firewood...or swap it for a fish."
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Posted: 12th Apr 2009 22:47
Very good, keep up the great work
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Posted: 13th Apr 2009 03:23
Very nice atmosphere, but it looks a bit repetitive. The game would definitely benefit from some different scenes, but what you have here is great.

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Thanks for the comments ....


@CoffeeGrunt:

Quote: "I'm loving the screens, it has beautiful atmosphere...

The story's grammar is a little broken, but that's not important. I'd change the HUD though, it's too...simple, perhaps fill the semi-circle bit with slightly opaque black?"


Thanks, my grammar isnt good indeed , and about the hud... do you mean the eyehud, then yeah, i have a nicer design in my head

@dumpus:

Quote: "Very nice atmosphere, but it looks a bit repetitive. The game would definitely benefit from some different scenes, but what you have here is great."


thanks mate, it does look a bit repetitive , but this is just the first level (or the second I dont know if will make the first level in SS-City-13), so there will be a lot more.

EDIT: Be Prepared For New Screens!!!


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Here is a VERY experimental TRAILER for you people to enjoy.

Please Comment, remember this is VERY VERY experimental.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QNXeNacMZ8M

That's for Now. I am very busy with school. So the development of Red Eye will go a little slower. But it WILL.



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The trailer is really put well together...but you don't show anything about the game itself..
I like the music and the montage though!

(Waar heb je die muziek vandaan?)

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Quote: "but you don't show anything about the game itself.."


that is true.. it is very experimental... i hope i will have some time to make a new better more touching (moving) Trailer.

I am busy with some new levels and remaking SS-City-13 to show you people.

Quote: "(Waar heb je die muziek vandaan?)"


email ik je wel, ik heb het gemixt met een aantal tracks
(I dont know if this is against the AUP, (talking in another language), but i will truduce so this wont get locked, and i slaped : I mixed the music with different songs of NGXMusical. So Credits for the music (from the Trailer only) goes to him.


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good trailer alot of mystery.

more than what meets the eye
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Posted: 14th Apr 2009 03:57 Edited at: 14th Apr 2009 03:59
Cool trailer Red Eye. I hadnt had time to read your story before. I did now. Pretty cool. Reminds me of "Bundles". Green tenticleworm things that have the ability to morph and split into the basics of other creatures in my storyline.

I look forward to seeing more.

EDIT: Are the tentacle things animated?
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Posted: 14th Apr 2009 17:55 Edited at: 14th Apr 2009 18:01
@michael x : thanks mate

@apple slicer: thanks,,, well if you see the pictures and the story... All clues of the enemy goes too Nature,, and all her creatures/ plants/insects and ,.... well... that will be a mistery,,, if i have time i will finish the layout of my pdf with the story and will upload it, so you people can read..
Many plants are indeed animated. Some attack.. Others are friendly and show you the path to your destiny...


EDIT: Well this week i have 4 exams, so i am very busy with school. Stay tuned because next week there will be alot more.


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Awesome. I'm going to email you about some stuff in one minute.

Edit: I sent an email, but here is the Bryce file.
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ok you post a message when i was editing

@everyone: i am also updating the trailer with new things...

Edit: thanks mate you are awesom.. Gonna check my mail.


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Lol. Okay. Can I take down the Bryce file?, if you got it?
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Maybe send yo my email i am on my iphone and far from Home


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Its okay. I'll just leave it until tonight.

No worries.
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Downloaded on a USB Stick. When I am home i will look, Thanks for the help, .

People, Don't Forget to Check the Update/Screenshot Section on the first post.



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Ah darn. Cant see the shots. They are blocked by the school network here. It says the site is blocked for the reason of: porn. lol.
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Well i think it is time to show you, my WIP Glass Temple/Room:

(Remember this is VERY W.I.P., more to show you the glass room)

Screenshot:

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this is just freaking ultra super duper awesome! cant wait to play a demo or see ingame footage

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I updated the room: (A tree can't grow on glass )

EDIT: This is just one of the many rooms/levels i am making at the moment. But as i am very busy with school, the development of Red Eye, will go a little slower. But i am planning to make a Demo (couple of levels), so you can experience what's like.

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@djmaster: I think i am gonna release a demo. Next week maybe. (Dont quote me on that).

Well... So again i updated the Glass Room.. I hope you enjoy it.

Screenshots Removed.

PLEASE POST COMMENT & CRITIC


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This is the final Update of the Glass Room. (Bugs and Glitches are fixed). (Framerate is 30-39).

Here are 4 screenshots:


http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/9849/screen2f.jpg

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/8222/screen3smt.jpg

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3310/screen4qxz.jpg

C&C is Welcome


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That looks sweet, but did you have to make the exact same room upside down for the reflection?

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Hey, yeah...He must have. Thanks for the idea Red eye.
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Ohh, I thought he was using a water reflection from EFX or something...

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@darimc: thanks, and yeah i had to duplicate everything

@apple slicer: no problem, i think , but could you say wht u think of it?

@coffeegrunt: no graphical enhancement mods, just little eye effects: i would like to hear some critic...


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Sorry Red Eye. I have to say, I love, I mean LOVE your pictures and storyline. I am going to send you an email soon.
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Thanks apple slicer. Sended you an email back.

@ everyone:

Next week, DEMO. This week nothing, no screen no story. Sorry


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very cool game~!

I will play the DEMO for sure

Now in the W.I.P. forum: operation sunlight
http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=149451&b=25
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nice job man! awesome

(of voor de nederlanders hier GEWELDIG)

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Quote: "nice job man! awesome

(of voor de nederlanders hier GEWELDIG)"


thanks, another dutch person

dankjewel, leuk dat er nog meer nederlanders komen


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Looks very awesome,only one thing,i found a mispell in your story,you typed oxigen and it should be oxygen.

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Quote: "Looks very awesome,only one thing,i found a mispell in your story,you typed oxigen and it should be oxygen."


thanks mate, i will edit it,

@all: i will release a demo end of this week, stay tuned, i am just finishing texturing a character, i will post some screens soon, back on the road mates,


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I think to begin with I'll focus on things not in game First of all, there are numerous spelling errors scattered around your story, as well as the trailer. I understand that English isn't your first language, but it's not exactly hard to copy and paste your text into Word and hit F7 Anyway, enough on spelling.

I thought the trailer was relatively pointless. For almost the entire 1:20 I was staring at a blank screen and some text, with the exception of about 4 seconds of video, which wasn't even in game . A trailer is designed to advertise your game and build up anticipation for it, and to be honest; it bored me (not to say I won't download your game, it is free after all).

The storyline is pretty typical of most other sci fi alien games. Unstoppable alien force...humans forced off the planet...humans find a way to kill aliens...humans reindustrialise Earth etc etc. Though to be honest it was badly worded so I didn't really understand it anyway.

One other thing, why is CoZ referred to as his game 'Demon Sun' under the beta testers

Now, onto the screens.

I really like the green lighting and the plants in the game, giving it a cool, original touch. The custom HUD is a nice break away from the traditional FPSC games, although I really don't like the placement of the lives counter. You've placed lights well and made good use of CSG Cutters. The game itself looks good

The banner at the top of the thread is slightly plain/boring. It's just a red circle fading into black. Maybe you could work on this and make it into some form of recognisable icon?

One more thing. The name 'Red Eye' has already been trademarked, meaning that using it is illegal. I suggest you change the name.

Migration Discussion Thread: http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=142497&b=21
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