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3 Dimensional Chat / M1 Carbine

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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 20th Apr 2009 22:28 Edited at: 20th Apr 2009 23:24
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Just something ive been working on for the last hour or so.
I'm no gun expert so dont kill me with technical stuff lol





Hope you like it
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Quik
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Posted: 20th Apr 2009 22:33
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i love that weapon^^ Looking great!


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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 20th Apr 2009 22:50
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Thank you !
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KeithC
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Posted: 20th Apr 2009 22:57
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Very good start!

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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 20th Apr 2009 22:59
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Thanks Keith !
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nackidno
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Posted: 20th Apr 2009 23:08
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Looks really clean. Keep it up!

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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 20th Apr 2009 23:23
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Thank you very much !
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Game maker wannabe
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Posted: 20th Apr 2009 23:36
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Dude you are improving so much! So much better than I, and I've been modelling way longer.

This looks great.

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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 21st Apr 2009 00:22
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Thanks for all these great comments, They are motivating me to make more
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Posted: 21st Apr 2009 01:22
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Looking good, it seems like you could get away with adding a little more detail to the stock, as well it looks a bit overly curved for the weapon. I also think your sights might be a bit large, but certainly a fantastic start and I look forward to seeing it with some texture.

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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 21st Apr 2009 21:47
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Thanks for the crit will take this in mind, Also i will be texturing this today/tonight
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 04:23
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Nice job on the rifle.

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Looks very nice so far!

I can't help but feel the sight is a little too high though, could do with lowering.

Other than that, Good stuff!



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Alucard94
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 12:11
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Good stuff, can't see any direct issues from just looking at it. Looking forward to the textured one.


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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 18:25 Edited at: 23rd Apr 2009 18:27
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Thanks all !

Just to make sure you guys know:
*The Sights have been lowered.
*And the stock has been further detailed.
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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 18:55
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Here is a pic:
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Quik
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 19:14
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looking good but Ohmygodthatwasbright (atleast on my computer)

nice, better than i can do i belive=P


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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 19:17
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It's even better now.

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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 19:19
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Thanks all
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 20:33
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Definitely looking much better! Well done.



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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 22:21
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Thank you very much!
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 22:32
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One suggestion might be to just lower the white level on the Ambient Occlusion for the next time you render, makes it a bit easier on the eyes.


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Yeah, i presume you are using a skylight with indirect illumination, right? You may just have to move the skylight further away, turn down the multiplier, or if you have any extra lights, delete them. Looks great btw

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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2009 23:48
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Yeah, my bad lol.

Thanks once again
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Looks much better, especially with the sites at a reasonable level. Keep it up.
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Demon Air 3D
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Posted: 24th Apr 2009 23:33
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Thanks alot mate !
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Posted: 25th Apr 2009 02:25
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Sorry for the double post, But does anyone have a good unwrapping uv's tutorial

Thanks alot!, just i need more info on uv mapping.
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