Ive been thinking of a story for a so far unnamed and unstarted game made using The latest version of Project Blue UM. Here is the story. I would love some Crit on the story and I am open to any suggestions.
Quote: "An ancient legend and a strict creed reveal one of the greatest secrets of all time.
Marty Rhodes is an office worker living in Chicago. He lives a pretty normal life. His father is a Colonel in the USMC. When he turned fifteen years old his dad trained him to use certain weapons, namely, pistols and assault rifles, but over the years he taught himself to use other, more complex weapons. It’s been sort of like a hobby to him, and he never thought it would be anything more. One day when coming home from work, Marty walked into a house that had been robbed. Furniture was knocked over, books were tossed over the floor and all the pictures were broken. Marty didn’t think he had anything valuable enough to steel, but he remembered his fathers safe. When his father was called into service, he left Marty a safe. He said it contained one of their family’s greatest possessions. The only problem, his father never told him the combination. He said that he would find out when the time was right. Marty contacted the police about the robbery but they weren’t able to find any evidence. Marty cleaned up his apartment and resumed life as he lived before. But about a week after the robbery Marty was kidnapped. He awoke in a small shack tied to a chair. The guard noticed he was awake and he called someone on his radio. A few moments later a man walked in. He explained to Marty that they stole the Safe and they needed the combination. They said the safe contained a key part to their conquer of the small tropical island they took Marty to. He told them he didn't know the combo and naturally they didn't believe him. They said they would kill him if he didn’t tell them and gave him the night to make a decision. Marty was awake the whole night. At about midnight Marty saw a stack of papers on a nearby table. They were held together with a paper clip. Marty hopped his chair over to the table and knocked the papers off. Then he tipped himself over in the chair. He pulled off the paper clips with his handcuffed hands behind his back. He used what he knew of lock picking to open the handcuffs. Once out of the handcuffs, he reached in the guard’s bag on the ground and pulled out a Combat Knife. He cut the ropes and freed himself. Marty had a long journey ahead of him to recover his fathers safe, discover who his kidnappers were and discover what was really inside the safe."
I updated the story A little bit. Theres no major changes, just details that I found wrong.
