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Black Rebel Heart
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Posted: 5th Aug 2009 05:36 Edited at: 6th Aug 2009 04:52
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Please rate my first album! (A Lost Forest)

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Note: This is a mix of the two easier for you to listen to

EDIT: I had to shorten the url or href would not work
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Phaelax
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Posted: 6th Aug 2009 01:08
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I don't trust websites who hide their real URL, might be why nobody has responded to your post yet.

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lazerus
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Posted: 6th Aug 2009 01:43
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Quite alot of static in the ambients, whit noise is floating around thier as well, its been a while since i crited music, especially ambient, its oaky really, though 'A lost Forest' track hurt my ears -_-

"the wind bothers me, its sudden acrid coldness. The world around me darkens and the moon seems distant, unforthcoming, hostile"
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NeX the Fairly Fast Ferret
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Posted: 6th Aug 2009 01:53
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Can I have my four minutes back please?

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Black Rebel Heart
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Posted: 6th Aug 2009 03:16 Edited at: 6th Aug 2009 03:36
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Four minutes of kvlt raw black metal with touches of ambient. Also, I thank you all for the comments.

I'm quite an enthusiast in this stuff as you can see.
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Phaelax
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Posted: 6th Aug 2009 04:18
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1561 - piano playing needs work.
Intro - 1min of nothing then the rest sounds like a bad nintendo game
lost forest - the feedback at 40sec was extremely irritating and so i deleted all 3 "songs".

Don't want to sound too mean, but neither of them were any good.

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Black Rebel Heart
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Posted: 6th Aug 2009 04:37
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Thanks, I understand. It's supposed to be raw but I'm going to work a little more with ambiance in the future. Guitar is just not my thing...
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Benjamin
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Posted: 6th Aug 2009 04:43
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1561 - Piano needs improving (the notes aren't so evenly played) and its presence needs to be enhanced. It's too much in the background right now.

Intro - The start kinda sounds like wood burning? Otherwise I'm not sure I understand it. The theme is not bad, though the mix needs to be improved.

Lost Forest - You need to drop the feedback, it hurts the ears.

Another tip I'd like to give you is try not to change the tune too radically at certain points (where there are different parts), as it can sound disjointed and as if it doesn't know where it is. Having an intro works fine with this kind of music, but as it's ambient you don't want it jumping around too much.

Not bad, keep it up.
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