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3 Dimensional Chat / a head model i have made, C&C very welcome

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Quik
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Posted: 28th Aug 2009 20:54 Edited at: 29th Aug 2009 20:50
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okay, so here is a head model i have made, any C&C for further projects is VERY appriciated




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Azunaki
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Posted: 28th Aug 2009 22:32
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could you give a more perspective view of the head.

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Posted: 28th Aug 2009 23:44
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first post updated with side view


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...perspective.. (viewing the side and front... at the same time...)

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Posted: 29th Aug 2009 20:43 Edited at: 29th Aug 2009 20:51
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aha sorryXD will fix that
edited first post again


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Posted: 29th Aug 2009 22:22
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the model looks pretty good..but there are a few things id like to mention(BTW triangles are your friend not your enemy...)

ok so 1 should just be welded together... i don't even know why you put that there... 2 also can just be welded shut... and 3 not bad but it looks kinda strange..

also the chin is a little big but that could just be me.

it almost looks like it doesn't have cheek bones. the eyes seem a little far back.

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Posted: 30th Aug 2009 22:51 Edited at: 30th Aug 2009 22:52
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well at the 1: i dont know how what occured, wasnt ment =P gotta be when i subbed =P (its subdivided 1 time) and i didnt understand the second thing u mentioned.. also 3: thanks =P i tried hard to get the nose right =/

thanks for the crit, btw its my first try with this model style, starting at the eyes with a plane, then extruding


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I think the head is long. I also think it would look more human with ears and without the creepy smile. But then the smile would be changed in the final model if you added bones.

Looks good, it appears capable of lip-synching with shapekeys.

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Posted: 31st Aug 2009 07:52
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yea i didnt add ears cuz i dont know how to do them.. yet ^^


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Good start!



Red arrow = areas to fix
Blue arrow = serious revising needed

In fact, you can probably delete one or two complete edge loops around where that blue arrow is. That line is going everywhere! I can follow it down from the temple all the way to the back of the skull.

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Like I said, great start. Probably the best head WIP I've seen in a while around here. Make some changes and post again!

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Posted: 31st Aug 2009 13:11
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thanks sid, iam at school atm so cant do anything yet, but yeah, i will fix the areas u told me to, nice crit u gave me =P thanks


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