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3 Dimensional Chat / Crocodile-ish character WIP

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Mazz426
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Posted: 10th Sep 2009 21:27 Edited at: 10th Sep 2009 21:28
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hello,
I wanted to show poeple what I started a few
hours ago. As said there i only started this
model, mabey, 2 hours ago so it is very rough
and of course still in WIP form. i recently
played Batman AA and i really liked killer
croc so what I'm wanting to do is make two
versions this one and then another that has
exagerated muscles.

i forgot to give you lot a wireframe version,
but its so low poly it isn't very difficult
to see where each poly is, it currently stands
at 1077 polies.

tell me what you think please, here is the render


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mike5424
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Posted: 10th Sep 2009 21:38
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what are you using (sorry if you've allready said. didn't read the text ) it looks like blender...
try setting it to smooth.

nice work so far!

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Cong
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Posted: 10th Sep 2009 21:40
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yeah very nice polycount and looks cool has character to it wich is great
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Azunaki
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it looks kinda flat could you give us a more side view(not straight on though)

and it kinda looks like cinema 4D. i say that becasue of the shading.

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Toasty Fresh
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Posted: 11th Sep 2009 04:50
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Lengthen the arms a bit. Kinda short, and make them a bit bulkier too.
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Azunaki
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arms should reach mid way down your thighs.

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Dared1111
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The mouth its sort of smiley. Otherwise this looks great. The muscles could do with being a bit more savage though.

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Fallout3fan
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In my perspective that character looks like it came from Killer 7 the heaven smiles

Im a making a game soon..
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BowserYo
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Arms are a little short. I would add more muscle to the biceps and the trapezius (the muscle between shoulder cuff and neck). Also, he doesn't have much of a shoulder. Maybe you can add definition to his abdominal muscles as well.

Other than that this is looking great! Keep up the good work!

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