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3 Dimensional Chat / hellow, long time no see, making a new game

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 18th Sep 2009 01:30 Edited at: 18th Sep 2009 01:34
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Well hello every one, long time no see. I need some help here with a modle. im making a new game where jesus comes back and raises the dead. well the object of the game is the player is chosen to go all around the world to rais the dead, heal the sick, make the blind see agien. you need to go over to jesus to get faith in every level to preform all your miracles. the more faith you have the eaiser the miracles are, also you will need to answer bibble questions to advance to the next levil.so any way I need a JESUS modle. Im making all the rest of the modles my self but i was hoping to buy a jesus modle for the part. I need the jesus modle to be supereb so if any one sees one out there let me know. here is my first character i modled yesterday, he will be the main player. you will be able to choose from this guy or a woman.
the game will be 3rd person made in dark basic pro with lots of specail effects.



thanks for your help

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henry ham
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Posted: 18th Sep 2009 01:55
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hi mate good to see you back

cheers henry

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Isn't religion one of the topics that we aren't supposed to be discussing?

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Azunaki
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it being so controversial it could be.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 18th Sep 2009 05:11
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Hello there henry, how things been.

it Isn't religion we are talking about, the game is about religion but any how just asking if any one has seen a christ modle for sell any where. Ive searched and only found ones with him on the cross. thanks for your help in advanced.

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Sid Sinister
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Posted: 18th Sep 2009 10:04 Edited at: 18th Sep 2009 10:39
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Jesus isn't for sale? Bummer..

Quote: "Isn't religion one of the topics that we aren't supposed to be discussing?"


As long as you stay grown up and focus on the game here, not the religion, then this thread should be fine.

This thread could be locked though because it's more or less a give me teh models thread. Other than that, I hope it's not locked because of immaturity or flames.

PS: Daniel, I'll be sending you a message soon. Keep your eyes peeled.
PSS: Sent.

Good looking model thus far. One thing you could do is take what you already have in that guy and tweak it a little to create a new character. No need to start over from scratch, reuse work!

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 18th Sep 2009 12:07
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Sent you one back, thanks. here is my new game guys i just finished. the first one will be the main player and the second one will be some one He has to heal.





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Sid Sinister
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I never got it back, weird. When did you send it?

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Sid Sinister
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Got it, it was blocked by my spam blocker for some reason. Anyway, sent you another one back.

Your character is looking good!

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 19th Sep 2009 03:53
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thanks for the compliment, there not fully done yet but im not looking for prefection in them.

I did not get a reply from my last email to you.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 19th Sep 2009 05:33 Edited at: 19th Sep 2009 05:34
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this guy is finished, he is going to be one of the guys that need heald, he will be in and out difrent levils with difrent problems.



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Sid Sinister
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Check your spam folder, it might be in there. If not, I guess I'll resend it.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 19th Sep 2009 12:03 Edited at: 19th Sep 2009 12:06
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I checked I did not recive it.

any how here is my 2nd game guy all finished, animated and ready for my new game, im thinking there will be around 50 diffrent animated modles in the game in all.


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Long time no seeing indeed, good you came back.


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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 19th Sep 2009 12:22
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well thank you, Im here to show off my new game im working on, meet some new people and share some talent with you guys.

here is my main player being set up for animation, if any one needs anything let me know.








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Hey Daniel, how's it going? The guy's look cool. Are you thinking of ever starting MoonRising back up?

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Posted: 19th Sep 2009 23:21 Edited at: 19th Sep 2009 23:22
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MoonRising didn't seem to be very popular, considering I never got any purchases. (allegedly)

As for the current models, they have the same things you got flamed for last time you was here. The faces look stretched and plastered on, the body is completely out of proportion and the head is just... odd.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 20th Sep 2009 01:44
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@darimc, hello friend, long time no talk to, no im done with doing a store or fourms as it took up all my time. but i do have other ideas that will be fun to do and rewarding.

@ Aaagreen, hello, long time no talk to,

your question

they have the same things you got flamed for last time you was here

well, im sorry you dont like my modleing skills, I think i have gotten way better, thease are only for my game and no one else so your take on my modles wont effect my progress, but i will do one thing, you point out in a very illustrated way on how my modle is not well porportioned in a 3d editor then i will gladly fix it.thanks for the feed back..

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Quote: "well, im sorry you dont like my modleing skills, I think i have gotten way better, thease are only for my game and no one else so your take on my modles wont effect my progress"


Daniel, I tell you the following things as a friend.

1. If you post your work here, prepare to have it critiqued. If you don't want the critique, don't post. We aren't here to blow sunshine up your butt. I didn't catch the last time you were flamed, so I don't know what that's all about. But I'm guessing it might be because of your attitude about your work.

Feedback is an ESSENTIAL part of game development. If your models are repulsive, no one's going to want to play your game. Listen to your peers and take it all in stride. If it's horrible feedback, don't take it personally but take it as a challenge.

Even if you don't care about if people want to play your game or not, the very fact that you posted your work is grounds to have it reviewed. Just know that and expect it.

Polycount is a board thriving with professionals that are currently within the game industry. If you want to get a crash course on accepting critique and sucking it up, then read this thread: http://boards.polycount.net/showthread.php?t=61271. (Warning: Vulgar language)

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I think the models are good expesially the texturing. Some problems though are the hand to arm length, and arm lenght to leg length ratios may be a bit wack.


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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 20th Sep 2009 02:41 Edited at: 20th Sep 2009 02:42
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I agree, I had no problem with his critic, he has every right for an opinion, I do listen to peoples critic and dont mind if the points are valid, like he only said there where parts to seem unproportioned, well this is fine but he never stated where the body is out of proportion. so now i was stuck on where it is becouse i dont see it, as far as the arms being to long now i see it. thanks for pointing that out Terrestrial Productions, please tell me what modle though, is it my ganster or my bibble thumper.

I do see i need to fix the texture on the gangsters face a little.

@Sid Sinister, I know, ive been through this already and refuse to play into it. im not here to fight, so ill defintly listen to all my critics.

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i find them repulsive. you shouldn't use realistic textures, ever. especially if you don't remove any shine ect from them. the clothes don't fit together. they reflect light differently, you don't have parts of the cloth on right. some areas are what ever that thing around the wrist is it looks like a watch and having it on both sides makes your tuxedo look even worse then it already does. on top of that the most recent pictures the front of the face is darker then the sides which makes it look like a joke.

to be honest when you first made this i though you were joking.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 20th Sep 2009 03:10
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i find them repulsive

i find that comment rude but you have a rite to your opion.

the watch you speak of is his sleaves.

as far as his tuxedo its not a tuxedo its a coat from a suit.

I did fix the sides so there is no streching.

you said

don't have parts of the cloth on right.

where?

you said

on top of that the most recent pictures the front of the face is darker then the sides which makes it look like a joke

here is the texture im using for the face so where is the problem?

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delited this post

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Daniel wright 2311
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Well I but changed him agien,lol. I took note on everything said and did a quick retexture. Tell me what you think and what needs fixed now so i can animate him. thanks for the critic







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Well, if I may speak freely, i really like you models, but there is something with the head, it seems as if they where to small in front vieuw, but in side view they are like perfect. Maybe they are not width enough??

I don't know, but maybe, if you think its a bit wrong to, you might be able to fix it.

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Daniel wright 2311
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@ Isocadia ,thanks for that, the head is to big in the front, I fixed it, then i did a compleat makeover on him. he is now done.



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Hey looking really nice
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Yeah, that look more like it. And are you going to use the jesus guy in you forst post?? If you do, you might want to make the head width a little smaller, for now he looks a bit stretched.

And when your game comes out, I will definatly play it.

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Hi daniel, Your models look pretty good. As far as the proportions go, don't drive yourself crazy trying to create the perfect character. Not every human in the world is the same proportionally.

The boxing type character seems fine to me as is. If anything i'd do, I would probably make that last characters thighs a little more beafy, his feet from the side view seem to be a bit small in shoe size so maybe give him slightly bigger feet, the torso also seems a little bulky comparing to the arms and legs. As for the style of your characters vs the textures, this really depends on your game environment as to whether the textures are right for the character or not. If you plan to create your whole world based on photo textures, then I really don't see these textures being much of a problem.

On another note, I do agree that people will often leave bad critisism which is fine and all because it is key to learning. However, If a person is to leave a negative crit, Atleast point out what it is that you think could be change and how. to just say it is unproportioned is not good enough for a person to truely understand what the problem is. And last Atleast these are not weapons as it seems to me that most people here can't seem to get past. So keep up the good work.
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Daniel wright 2311
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@Cong
thank you, ive been working hard

@Isocadia

Well I do need a jesus modle still as I could modle it, and most lickly will but it would be nice not have to modle every single modle in my game.the first guy i showed was my first modle i modled for this game just with a difrent head, i use a dummy head when i make the body, this way he turns out ok before i modle the head.

@tatts

you said

Not every human in the world is the same proportionally

I know,lol, this is what i have been trying to say for a long time know, thanks for that.

you said

The boxing type character seems fine to me as is

you know I still changed his textures around to and know he looks real good. a lot better any how.

thanks for your kind words.

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Daniel wright 2311
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here is a quick preview for my other guy, I had to compleatly re texture him, then i had to re skin him, im still working out his skins but the last skining was not good at all, this time all his animations are almoast perfect.





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Daniel wright 2311
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Im now working on the full story, I have to sit down and right it out compleatly from scratch. Ill post it here when im done.

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Well, just one more comment, it seams as if the breast of the "black" guys are a bit low ( sorry if i insult anyone with this comment ).

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