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3 Dimensional Chat / Us army men in the making

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 29th Sep 2009 08:33 Edited at: 29th Sep 2009 08:37
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@Alucard you said

You have some MAJOR proportion issues, look up some anatomy references and model off of that.

well sence your such a good modler, ive seen your stuff, really good, I can trust you to tell me where the portions are off, so i can studie this and learn from it? thanks

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Alucard94
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Posted: 29th Sep 2009 08:56
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I did a quick paint over thing. The red portions are some more noticeable proportion issues and the blue ones are areas that have some more major texture stretching.
These issues seem to carry over to some of your other models as well.



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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 29th Sep 2009 09:31
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as far as the streaching I have already fixed all this , thanks, but as for the proportions i see alot now, thank you for this. ill studie this and my next modle ill use this to refrence from.thank you for your time Alucard94 .

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 29th Sep 2009 14:10
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here is his new face with only his defuse map applyed.




here he is with only his specular map.



this one is with everything



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RUCCUS
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Posted: 29th Sep 2009 14:50
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I agree, everything is a little mediocre. The proportion issues are your biggest problem; thumbs are far too long, muscle anatomy of the arms is pretty wonky, crotch is too high, etc. But the texture work has some issues as well. It looks as if you've just thrown a few different photos of camo into photoshop and wrapped it around your texture. They all have different saturations and tones that just dont blend together. Id recommend trying to keep your clothing textures less saturated with a few accents of colour at points of interest like a medal or belt.

The animations are pretty good though, a few minor looping issues from what I can see but other than that they're very fluid.
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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 30th Sep 2009 11:15
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@RUCCUS, ok thanks, ill work on all what you stated.like his textures, i am still learning on how to add detail and blending colors.as far as the modles being out of proportion I really dont see how this matters with game modles becouse the way i see it every one in the world looks difrent but I will try my best to keep them in more proportion to the picture above.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 30th Sep 2009 18:55 Edited at: 30th Sep 2009 18:58
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so any how I took this comment to heart.



so I decided to redo some of the guys textures and make them better, here is the first.

I detailed his face, his vest and over all aperance.im still working on him.



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lazerus
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Posted: 1st Oct 2009 01:14
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They have no groin.

If that is thier groin then what the hell have those americans been feedin thier soilders????

Thiers some major stretching,m along with seaming and proportion issues. I had some very good references but not on my laptop so ill post them tommorow.

I take its a single base mesh re textured? Since the uniform detials are non exsistant.

Its a good shot, but you need to modify each mesh for each chracter, simple retextures dont really work.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 1st Oct 2009 02:05 Edited at: 1st Oct 2009 02:10
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@lazerus ,


I detailed his face, his vest and over all aperance.im still working on him.

as in, im still working on him, I will show a better render when im done with him, now there is no streaching,and the proportions are all fixed. you said

They have no groin.

are you looking at there groins,lol

you said

I take its a single base mesh re textured? Since the uniform detials are non exsistant.

so far i have modled 9 difrent meshes for thease guys, I am retextuing some of them to add more modles to the whole pack.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 1st Oct 2009 04:24 Edited at: 1st Oct 2009 04:27
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ok, here is all the modles I have complete so far, they all look and work real good in game. thease are 100 percent done, now im moving on to the next one.thease shoots where taken with no effects added to them, just drop and shoot.



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Beast E Gargoyle
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Posted: 2nd Oct 2009 19:48
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@Daniel- The characters are good, but the detail in the texture is weak. The seams on the characters should be brought out in Photoshop using a depth texture map applied to the pre-existing camo body texture to simulate real creases and puffy shoulders.

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 2nd Oct 2009 22:30
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@Beast E Gargoyle hello there, how have you been? any how I do do this but thease are just renered without any maps in game yet. here is my next dude, he is the best so far.







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mike5424
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Posted: 2nd Oct 2009 22:35 Edited at: 2nd Oct 2009 22:37
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looks like an old man XD

EDIT: oops... i was still reading the first page, i was talking about the general with the kane

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 2nd Oct 2009 22:38
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50s,lol

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Pincho Paxton
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Posted: 3rd Oct 2009 02:58
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I think the new one looks really good!

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Daniel wright 2311
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Posted: 3rd Oct 2009 05:31
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thanks guys, the pack is avialible now, I put the download in fpac modles section.

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lazerus
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Posted: 4th Oct 2009 13:25 Edited at: 4th Oct 2009 13:27
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When you wear any pants, are the sems stright down? try adujting the angle for them to slightly follow the leg.

And thiers something really wrong with the blue camo fella. His face is brighter than his uniform. And looks Too real for the rest of the texture.

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