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djmaster
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Posted: 24th Sep 2009 21:39 Edited at: 24th Sep 2009 21:40
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I practiced some basic lowpoly modelling and texturing today and made this simple scifi pistol.The texture isnt the best,kinda basic but I was improving lowpoly skills not texture making ones.So:

Scifi Pistol
Polycount:105
Texture:One 512x512 .dds texture
Formats:.max,.3ds,.obj
Download:.rar



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djmaster
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Posted: 24th Sep 2009 21:39
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Posted: 24th Sep 2009 22:12
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model itself is great, but the texture is like u said, pretty much basic, lacks detail and stuff, but the model is looking good


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Azunaki
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Posted: 25th Sep 2009 03:57
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when you use a black or dark texture could you render it with a white background its rather hard to see.

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Posted: 28th Sep 2009 04:22 Edited at: 28th Sep 2009 04:24
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I'm going to be burtally honest here: That doesn't look good. The texture is garbage, the design of the gun is simplistic and looks as though you thought it up in about a second, and the model is rather simplistic. Also, with low-poly modeling, you don't bevel. Maybe you manually bevel the handgrip or somthing but don't round off the whole thing. And you never use cylinders with that high an amount of sides, use something like five sides for the barrel.
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djmaster
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Posted: 28th Sep 2009 14:22
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It was just a practice so you cant expect AAA+ model from Crysis.And plus you dont know what kind of guns you will have in the future.Its an imaginary one,could be also used for cartoonish games.

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Posted: 28th Sep 2009 15:21
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Quote: "It was just a practice so you cant expect AAA+ model from Crysis."


No, but I can expect something a little better than the rest of your WIPs. For example, your UMP. That wasn't the best UMP I've ever seen but at least it was a little more than a couple of beveled boxes, a trigger and some slapped-on cylinders. You look like you haven't even based your texture on the UV map. The whole thing is the same bad clouds filter, aside from the things at the end of the slide.

Quote: "And plus you dont know what kind of guns you will have in the future."


I don't, but I'm pretty sure that they won't look like this; this doesn't even have a trigger guard.


Why don't you take my criticism instead of trying to whinge about how I'm wrong. Because I'm not. You can do better than this.

I know you're just going to come back with a childish argument like you usually do when I post in ANY of your threads but it's worth a try.
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Posted: 28th Sep 2009 18:05
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i have to agree with toasty =P the texture isnt brilliant (iam not saying i can do better) and it is very wrong, and the model isnt great either, take toastys advice here =P


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djmaster
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Posted: 28th Sep 2009 19:27
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It was just done because I was bored,quick model to get the time past.If you want to see some complex stuff,visit my website that I have in my sig and click Portfolio.

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Posted: 29th Sep 2009 01:21
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Quote: "It was just done because I was bored,quick model to get the time past."


That's fine. Most of you would be shocked at how bad some of my practice stuff looks like. That's why I don't post it.
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Posted: 30th Sep 2009 02:51
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dj if it was practice to "pass the time by" don't post it. we truly don't want to see it. its a waste of thread space, especially with it getting this much activity. and like i said before, render black on a light colored background. i can barely see anything in that screenshot.

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djmaster
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Posted: 30th Sep 2009 16:27
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Just let it die??? Thank you.


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Don't post if you have anything positive to say UNLESS THEY ASK FOR IT. I think the models good. He could make it a light colored background, but other than that, NOT EVERYONE IS A Henry Ham. Good job on the model and keep the good work up.


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Posted: 6th Oct 2009 09:35
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Thank you.Only 1% of people here understand that its not about the quality realy.This model could be easily used as a prop in a scifi game.And after all you can modify the model and texture.

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Posted: 6th Oct 2009 13:34
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Quote: "Don't post if you have anything positive to say UNLESS THEY ASK FOR IT."


Why not, exactly? Getting constructive criticism is half the reason anyone posts in 3D chat.

Quote: "Only 1% of people here understand that its not about the quality realy."


Well, did you know that that 1% of people don't really understand what 3D models are? Not really, but every experienced modeler I know (in fact, not just experienced, but ALL modelers I know), aspire to have models of genuine quality. What else are 3D models for? They are works of art, whether to be used in games or not.
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Posted: 6th Oct 2009 14:47
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Toasty, not everyone here is or aspires to be a professional. Please keep your personal opinions personal. Constructive criticism is good, but your comments are demoralising.

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Posted: 7th Oct 2009 06:19
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Quote: "but your comments are demoralising.
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How is,
Quote: "You can do better than this.
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Demoralising? I'm not trying to aggravate anyone, I'm trying to help.

Anyway, seeing as this is going nowhere, can someone lock this? Because it's obvious that the OP doesn't want this open any more than I do.
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I think that you did a good job on it.
Thanks.

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Posted: 3rd Jan 2010 15:39
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i think toast comments are accurate maybe a bit mean but constructive none the less.

its a good start to the model and thanks for giving it away for free. however you should take a day and improve it

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