Sounds quite well and indeed "soundtrack-like". The orchestral sounds are a bit synthy though, and I find the bass notes a bit blurry at places, but that might just be my failed woofer setup
Also, and note now that I'm a guy that's probably more into the melody than the average, I find that the song builds up a pretty good tension; this is all good, but I for one (and this is just my opinion in this case, and not really general "here's how music works" comments), would find it twice as good if you brought in a really epic theme at the end, preferably played by the trombone with wet but loud backing strings.
Others than that, good mix of synthetic and orchestral sounds.