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Grim_Reaper
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Hey everyone

I'm working on a new demo composition to send to various known game companies to try and land a job composing for one of them. I'm posting a short version(to keep the download small) of the song here because I would like some feedback on it.

What type of song is it? orchestral
what mood is it trying to emphasize? the title says it all...Scooby Doo VS. Godzilla

Any feedback is appreciated

http://www.geocities.com/grimreapercompositions/ScoobyVsGodzilla_Short.zip (copy and paste)

Enjoy!



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Eric T
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Posted: 9th Sep 2003 04:38
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As i said earlier... Defies all orchestral rules, it is a great peice for that.

Very Elfman esque

So SUBMIT!!!!!!!!!

Working on 4 projects 2 RPG(programming texturing and 3d map), 1 3rd person shooter (Programming), and a special project.
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Grim_Reaper
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thanks

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Eric T
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Posted: 9th Sep 2003 07:18
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that make 3 times i told you that

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Arrow
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Posted: 9th Sep 2003 17:47
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Forget games, that's good enough for movies.


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Posted: 9th Sep 2003 18:33
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Hmm is the link dead? Or does geocities not like download accelerator

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you is outta space on geocities

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Grim_Reaper
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Posted: 9th Sep 2003 23:16
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Arrow: Thanks

Zeal & CattleRustler: hmm...did you copy and paste the address in to the address bar? ...if so i dunno whats wrong...sometimes geocities is stupid like that. I'm buying real webspace soon tho.


Aaron

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Posted: 10th Sep 2003 01:26
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Very nice tune (a bit short, though - Yeah I know, file size).
Just one very little tiny thing: All instruments seem to be on the right panorama positions (modern orchestra layout, I guess) except for the percussion/timpani which are all too far centred. Apart from that it's brilliant.

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@empty: Thanks ...yea i see what you mean by the percussion not being wide enough in panning. I didn't really want to pan the percussion too much because in an orchestra its all the way in the back, but now that you mention it i guess it could be a little wider.


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Posted: 10th Sep 2003 01:55
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*slams probe into Grim_Reapers head*
*absorbs knowledge of his composing talents*

I got teh codez!

Great music, sounds like the title would imply. Now to find space in the thousands of mp3's I got on my comp (dont ask where they all came from, about 4000 I've never heard of before)


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Posted: 10th Sep 2003 01:59 Edited at: 10th Sep 2003 02:00
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Yeah I guess just a little bit more panning would do.
The first time I listened to it I couldn't actually even name what it was. So it's not a fun stopper anyway .

While we're at it, one question: Can you do MOD/IT music (or similar- must be "environmental music"), too?

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Quote: "*slams probe into Grim_Reapers head*
*absorbs knowledge of his composing talents*

I got teh codez!"


hehehe, teh theoriez!


Quote: "While we're at it, one question: Can you do MOD/IT music (or similar- must be "environmental music"), too?"


Hmm...not sure i've never really tried heh. Any examples?


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Well, creating music with tracker software (eg http://www.modplug.com/modplug/tracker.php3?session=)
So you can dynamically and seamlessly fade from one theme to another. I have a client who is interested in it.

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OH now i get what you meant heh. Yea i've never tried tracking much before. I'm more of a sequencer. The composing process for me goes from pen, to staff paper, to sequencer(Sonar XL), to sampler(GigaStudio 160).



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Link is working now, very cool stuff. Do you have anything else we can hear?

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Posted: 10th Sep 2003 02:22 Edited at: 10th Sep 2003 02:23
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Just listened to it - Excellent job!
Outstanding!

What software is being used here?
scratch that - I read above...

nice

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Quote: "I'm more of a sequencer"

Yeah I know what you mean. That's exactly my problem.

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I have been playing too much bass and guitar, time to break the Yamaha Midi sequencer out of the closet. After all I did buy it for making game music back when I first got DBC.

<evil grin>

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Zeal: Thanks, i have more stuff on my site but none of it is nearly as good as this track, as they are pretty old and i was still a bit new to composing heh.

Rustler: Thanks, I use a lot of stuff to compose with, from software to hardware/equipment. I use 3 programs, Gigastudio 160 and Cakewalk Sonar XL for the composing process, and Cool Edit Pro 2.0 for recording and mastering. I also use a Midiman Keystation 61-key midi controller, 6 channel mackie mixing board, and i use 2 soundcards, an M-Audio Audiophile 24/96 with GSIF(GigaSampler InterFace) capabilities(needed to use GigaStudio properly) and an SBLive for recording....The commercial GigaSample cd's i use as of now are SAM Horns, SAM Trombones, Ultimate Strings Collection, Orchestral Brass from Quantum Leap Brass, Quantum Leap Rare Instruments, Peter Siedlaczek's Classical Choir, and Drumkit From Hell....Other gigasample libraries i use are SAM free trumpets, SAM free timpani, and G-Town Orchestral Percussion, plus other various electronica samples. I also use a few VST libraries.



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thats very cool. I am not that advanced when it comes to midi/digital composing etc, I do however play fluently on 4 standard instruments (guitar, bass guitar, drums, keys) and have an 8 track Digital Studio (Fostex dmt8vl). I went and bought a decent yamaha controller (i guess that's what it's called) a keyboard with all sorts of wizardry/samples etc built in with a 16 track recorder as well - pretty nice for what I would need for gaming music (nothing on your scale, scale-no pun intended) It served a dual purpose for gaming midi and for regular band stuff. I haven't used it in a while but now that I am back into db thanks to dbpro4+ I will be yanking it out again. I had some stuff I did a while back that was actually coming along nicely, I was like "did I create that" because now I had all these tracks and all these instruments to play with like a kid in a candy store - but it was a while ago and I lost the files. Ah well time for some new stuff.

keep up the good work

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Quote: "I went and bought a decent yamaha controller (i guess that's what it's called) a keyboard with all sorts of wizardry/samples etc built in with a 16 track recorder as well"

I guess that would called a workstation.

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Yep, a keyboard that controlls midi, and has samples built in and is capable of creating mixes is called a workstation. A controller is one that only controls midi. Heh, we play the same instruments Rustler ...I'm a Drummer of 14 years(yes, i started when i was 3 lol), Guitarist of 10 years, and i've been playing bass and keys for about 2 years.



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I started on guitar at about 12, drums at 14, keys late teens, and bass I actually didn't seriously play until mid twenties, and it ended up becoming my "main" instrument (playing in band, doing shows etc) btw I am 33 now. I can appreciate all forms of music but I mainly enjoy modern/alternative rock. Actually when Stone Temple Pilots first came along it was their music that sent me into bass guitar. I love that damn band but that's another story.



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Veeeeeery good Would make an excellent addition to many game sound-tracks

Quikly Studio Pro. Soon. Honest.
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Thanks Kangaroo2

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