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3 Dimensional Chat / Remington 870MCS Shotgun *WIP*

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WolfeClaw
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Posted: 18th May 2010 02:03
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Hey guys, this is my first model made with Blender and I'm fairly impressed with it, however, I was wondering if you guys could help me out. All I need to know is:

How I can improve

How to make some very simple hands (I have yet to try so you don't really need to answer this one)

Some screenshots:



So yeah, I'm glad to be part of the community and please leave some feedback
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Asteric
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Posted: 18th May 2010 18:30
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Welcome man, im here if you ever need help, let me know.

Hard to tell the detail from the small images, some lighting would also help us see the detail.

One thing i did notice was that there is no clip to hold the shells that i can see, might want to consider adding one.

You are also missing the vertical clip that holds the two barrels in place.

For gun references, i always like to use this website:

http://www.pixagogo.com/Photos/Albums/PersonalGallery.aspx?name=DeicideNBF

Take a look over and see what is missing.

Thats all for now, hope it is useful to you.

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zeroSlave
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Posted: 18th May 2010 19:13
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Looks pretty nice, WolfeClaw. If it's your first model, you should be impressed! Looks like you have the flow of the gun down pretty good. Asteric mentioned a few things that are missing, and I would agree that a closer view or larger pic is in order! I think I can see some screws next to the trigger? Are they part of the texture, or are the separate meshes?

Anyway, the model is very nice for being such low poly. Throw a snazzy texture on there and you've got yourself a shotgun for a fun 2.5D shooter!

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