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FPSC Classic Models and Media / Fighter Jet Model W.I.P

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Poloflece
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Posted: 26th Jun 2010 17:23 Edited at: 26th Jun 2010 17:25
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Hi everyone

I have just started making a fighter jet model which i will be giving away as a freeby here on the forums

If you have any advice or ideas for my model please post here, your feedback will help alot

Here it is


and here is the wireframe


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charger bandit
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Posted: 26th Jun 2010 17:30
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Looks great for a start but a few tips:

-improve the texture and uvmap,I can see some stretching at the front
-try smoothing the model
-I can see the cockpit is slightly outside the body on the rear of the cockpit,try to fix it

If you fix these things,you will have an excellent model.


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Poloflece
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Posted: 27th Jun 2010 02:38 Edited at: 27th Jun 2010 02:40
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Ok
as see you can see i've fixed up the cockpit and i have smoothed the model.
Though I haven't yet retextured it yet




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CoffeeGrunt
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Posted: 27th Jun 2010 02:52
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No offense, but you could do with editing more or less all of it...

Look up fighter jets on Google. Your wings are aerodynamically wrong, and the cockpit should merge into the front more rather than sticking out like that. Also, the engines look strange:




http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=171328&b=2&p=0#m2034524
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starmind 001
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Posted: 27th Jun 2010 03:01
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Looks good. What program are you using to model this? Also I see you seem to be going for a f-22 raptor type look, so I looked around and found you some basic refs pics.



A larger one for you to download. Enjoy!

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Poloflece
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Posted: 27th Jun 2010 03:09 Edited at: 27th Jun 2010 03:32
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Quote: "Your wings are aerodynamically wrong, and the cockpit should merge into the front more rather than sticking out like that"


It is not really surposed to be a modern day fighter jet but more of a space fighter aircraft kind of thing and it is my first model though i will make an effort to make it more realistic


and Starmind001 I'm using AC3D

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Poloflece
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Posted: 27th Jun 2010 04:07 Edited at: 27th Jun 2010 08:59
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I've fully redone the body and texture of the aircraft
but the air intakes are yet to be completed.
I probably still will release the other aircraft


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Bonehead games
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Posted: 27th Jun 2010 09:58
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Looks sweet
Keep it up

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CoffeeGrunt
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Posted: 27th Jun 2010 13:00
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That's looking much sleeker and much better...

http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=171328&b=2&p=0#m2034524
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The Zoq2
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Posted: 28th Jun 2010 11:38
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I think the first unsmoothed version was best

nice work

Srry about my english im from sweeden
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Poloflece
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Posted: 28th Jun 2010 11:55
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Quote: "I think the first unsmoothed version was best"

Yeah it does look a lot sharper, but also very basic and unrealsistic
it was inspired by Spore.

Thanks

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Poloflece
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Posted: 28th Jun 2010 11:57 Edited at: 28th Jun 2010 12:09
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I have posted a basic fpsc ready version of this on my website
Please comment on the model and not the Fpsc version

I do not know how to properly export my texture so the cockpit is black
P.s. I was using multiple textures

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The Zoq2
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Posted: 29th Jun 2010 10:26
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What modelling program are you using??

Srry about my english im from sweeden
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Poloflece
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Posted: 29th Jun 2010 10:29
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ac3d

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PW Productions
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Posted: 29th Jun 2010 12:52 Edited at: 29th Jun 2010 12:54
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Cool, AC3D - I use it as well. Now I think a great tool for you to use wıth AC3D is under Vertex - Snap together. The way this works:

-Select two or more vertexes by holding down shift and clicking
-Selecting Vertex > Snap Together
-Edit a bit so it looks right


What this does is snaps vertexes together to make separate objects flow into each other a lot better, and I think that's exactly what you need for this model. As CoffeeG said up ^^there^^ you need to pay close attention to the dynamics of a model Good luck with finishing it!

-PwP-


EDIT:

Your signature is the most original I've seen

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Poloflece
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Posted: 29th Jun 2010 14:31
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Thankyou PW productions, I didn't know how to do that
Quote: "Your signature is the most original I've seen"

Lol, I know

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Metal Devil123
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Posted: 29th Jun 2010 15:24
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The newes one looks the best! Great job!

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