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coyote978
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Posted: 18th Aug 2010 04:12
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Hello am just posting my first 3D model of a crate which i followed a tutorial on and learned how to model,uv map,and texure a 3D object.Please comment and give me feedback.

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Osiris
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Posted: 18th Aug 2010 08:39
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Not bad. I would add some more detail to the texture though. Maybe add some scratches and dirt. Make that logo a little scraped of. Add nails or screws.

All im trying to get as is that it looks too perfect haha. Even straight out of the factory things are dirty.

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coyote978
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Posted: 18th Aug 2010 13:08
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Thanks for the feedback.I shall try to work on what you have suggested.
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coyote978
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Posted: 18th Aug 2010 14:47
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Here is my updated version of my box.

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Pbcrazy
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Posted: 18th Aug 2010 15:27
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I like the new wood grain, but it is way too saturated. Town down that and add some more detail like Osiris said, and you'll be looking mighty spiffy!

Nails, graffiti, text, scraps/splinters, etc all add to the believability of the model.

I once read an article somewhere, give each prop a story, what has this object had to go through to get to the point it is today? It was made in a factory, and stamped with a delivery address. On the way it was left in a rain storm and suffered from rain damage. Once it finally reached its destination, it was dropped from the truck resulting in a splinter on its corner. ETC.
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coyote978
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Posted: 18th Aug 2010 20:07
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Ok,thanks for all the help ^^
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coyote978
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Posted: 21st Aug 2010 04:02 Edited at: 22nd Aug 2010 05:54
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Hi,changed the texture a bit and once again more feedback would be great thanks ^^

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Osiris
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Posted: 23rd Aug 2010 20:53
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Looks good

Now try adding some bent nails or metal caps for the box corners might look cool.

Do each of the sides have unique texture space or are they all overlapped?

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