Awesomeness man! just awesome!
Played it (since I got myself a fairly good laptop) and I had chicken bums all over me.
Here comes the good/bad/ugly verdict:
# The good
Awesome story, Nice looking environment, creepy atmosphere.
I felt the tension everywhere, and when those monster started to appaer, I shat brick.
# The bad
only 2 point of attention: the player's and the girl's voice over, were a bit to low quality for me to enjoy it. (maybe its just the mic your using idk.) Could use a bit more attention next time.
# The ugly
(No comment)
Oh, I found this in my toilet after taking a dump.
Cheers and a happy new year!
PekelaarSFX - Storywriter & Audio Designer.