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Geek Culture / Please help quick!(French poem)

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cusoi
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Posted: 9th Oct 2003 19:31
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I had to make a French poem for school, would you please be so kind to say if I've made any mistakes, and would you please give corrections if needed, thank you very much. This is it:

*** une vie triste ***

je suis seul
seul dans la rue

je n'ai pas de maison
je n'ai pas d'argent
je n'ai pas d'amis
je n'ai pas de famille
je n'ai pas d'amour

je n'ai pas de vie

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David T
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Posted: 9th Oct 2003 19:33
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I don't think there's anything wrong

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BatVink
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Posted: 9th Oct 2003 19:58
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Quote: "je n'ai pas de vie"


Literally, it probably doesn't mean the same in French as it does in English. But then you're Dutch which confuses the issue even more!

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cusoi
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Posted: 9th Oct 2003 20:23
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It should mean, I don't have a life(you know like having a normal nice life).

Thank you all for looking, if there's anyone french who looks on this post, I would be kind if you'd say if there are any mistakes.

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Shady 2005 Simpson
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Posted: 9th Oct 2003 22:09
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I can't see anything wrong with it.
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cusoi
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Posted: 10th Oct 2003 19:44
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Thank you very much all! I've given it too my teacher and it was all right! Thank you!

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Megaton Cat
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Posted: 10th Oct 2003 20:54
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wat a waste of thread. Should i start posting every time i get stuck on a math problem? Still we have to take French too hate it so much.

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If life is just one big joke...
then I must have missed the punchline.
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cusoi
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Posted: 10th Oct 2003 23:03
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... I tought I could ask it here... But other people answered my question already(kindly), what's the point of your post, if I may ask?

Don't want to start a flame ofcourse...

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Damokles
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Posted: 10th Oct 2003 23:07
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The poem is allright, but how about your life ? You really meant what you wrote ?

"Begin at the beginning, and go on till you come to the end: then stop." - Lewis Carroll
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cusoi
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Posted: 10th Oct 2003 23:10
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Thank you Damokles...

No, I'm happy to be able to say that I didn't mean what I wrote, my life is all right. We had to write a poem about someone who's homeless...

Thanks for being so worried about me...

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Megaton Cat
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Posted: 10th Oct 2003 23:18
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FLAMEEE YESSS.
lol just kidding. My posts have no meaning.

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cusoi
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Posted: 10th Oct 2003 23:27
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Okay..

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